Needles and Thread
Tyburn Poem25 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
A great photo to lead into your poem, which follows the requirements of the Tyburn Poetry format. Your choice of words is interesting: "blending " as in bringing pieces together into one mended piece.
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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A great photo to lead into your poem, which follows the requirements of the Tyburn Poetry format. Your choice of words is interesting: "blending " as in bringing pieces together into one mended piece.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Wendy thank you so very much for your thorough read and comments on this poem.
Comment from l.raven
I have never heard of the Tyburn form before...
but I like it...it is a challenge...
and being someone who sews...I know just 'what the poem is saying...I love your poem...very well written....picture perfect...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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I have never heard of the Tyburn form before...
but I like it...it is a challenge...
and being someone who sews...I know just 'what the poem is saying...I love your poem...very well written....picture perfect...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Linda, thanks so much for giving this reading of a tyburn poem your comments. Have a great week!
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you have a great week as well...and your so welcome...love xxoo
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very cute tyburn poem. I enjoyed reading it. I especially like poems about unusual subjects. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a very cute tyburn poem. I enjoyed reading it. I especially like poems about unusual subjects. I wish you lots of luck in the competition. Jen.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Hi Jen, thanks alot. I have not been very successful in the past getting one of these technically correct first and make sense secondly.
Comment from Patty Palmer
That works out well for the contest. I like the picture of the threaded needles. Those days are over for me. It used to take me a long while to thread a needle but these days I can't do it at all. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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That works out well for the contest. I like the picture of the threaded needles. Those days are over for me. It used to take me a long while to thread a needle but these days I can't do it at all. Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Patty, I had to forego the needle and thread to my dry cleaners seamstress.😊😉
Comment from Susan Larson
What a delightful read! And what a rendering of bending and blending words intending to fit the pattern of ascending syllables! No pretending, your poem's sending a bit of amusement from beginning to ending. Thanks for the fun!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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What a delightful read! And what a rendering of bending and blending words intending to fit the pattern of ascending syllables! No pretending, your poem's sending a bit of amusement from beginning to ending. Thanks for the fun!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Susan, I can't express my sincere thank you enough~
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork for
your topic and poem.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective descriptive
words, syllable count, and
good closing lines.
-Effective imagery and rhyme,
showing what the different
kinds of needles are used for.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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-Good artwork for
your topic and poem.
-You wrote a good poem
with effective descriptive
words, syllable count, and
good closing lines.
-Effective imagery and rhyme,
showing what the different
kinds of needles are used for.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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You are the best Pam, thanks!
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You are welcome, and I thank you, too, for the very nice reply.
Comment from E. Denison
This is an excellent entry for the Tyburn poetry contest. I enjoyed the movement this poem seemed to have, though it is brief, and succinct. The photo, too, is wonderfully paired. Both your entry and the photo express a lot, despite their minimalism. Well done and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is an excellent entry for the Tyburn poetry contest. I enjoyed the movement this poem seemed to have, though it is brief, and succinct. The photo, too, is wonderfully paired. Both your entry and the photo express a lot, despite their minimalism. Well done and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I am very grateful for your time and comments.
Comment from LaTessa
I really enjoyed reading this poem! I tried to write this style of poetry yesterday and I just couldn't get it right. You did a great job :) God bless!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I really enjoyed reading this poem! I tried to write this style of poetry yesterday and I just couldn't get it right. You did a great job :) God bless!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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LaTessa, keep trying, this is the first one I feel is worthy of mention. Thank you for these six stars. I am so grateful.
Comment from Jean Lutz1
I still try albeit hands are shaky and eyesight makes it harder to thread a needle. I often pack care packages for the homeless. A little sewing kit is usually including while I ponder if the recipient will know know how to use it. Ancient skills are becoming extinct. Art and words are well woven. I wish you well in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I still try albeit hands are shaky and eyesight makes it harder to thread a needle. I often pack care packages for the homeless. A little sewing kit is usually including while I ponder if the recipient will know know how to use it. Ancient skills are becoming extinct. Art and words are well woven. I wish you well in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Jean I remember my grandma and aunts holding sewing circles and the chatter oh my, the chatter.
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have done well on this difficult type of poem. I love the subject you chose, and the picture of the needles and thread. You have used very effective words: "blending, wending, mending, tending."
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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You have done well on this difficult type of poem. I love the subject you chose, and the picture of the needles and thread. You have used very effective words: "blending, wending, mending, tending."
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Anne, I tank you very much~ it is surprisingly more difficult than I anticipated.
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You are very welcome
