Comment from dragonpoet

Exceptional

This is a wonderful poem about the path of a love affair using the different sights and areas you can walk in and their effect on you. It also reminds you of the walk down the aisle when you get married.
Congrats on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021

Thank you ever somuch for your review. I greatly appreciate your comments, as well as the six stars.
Faye

reply by dragonpoet on 25-Mar-2021

Don't mention it, Faye.
Joan

Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick

Exceptional

This is a beautifully written rhyming poem. Come walk with me on along a sand laden shore pick up a seashell and hear the ocean roar. Brought by the waves as they come rushing to land. A scene repeated almost since time began. Beautiful photo to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2021

Thank you ever so much for the six stars. I also greatly appreciate your comments and your good luck wish.

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Congrats on your prize for this lovely and elegant verse--romantic indeed--could have been in the love poem contest--those entrants are surely glad it wasn't! Fine work. Cheers. LIZ

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021

Thank you ever so much for your uplifting comments. They are certainly appreciated.

Comment from Sararb

Exceptional

Beautiful work!! I loved it! I could feel myself taking this journey! Well written! I wouldn't want to change a thing! I also loved the artwork! Sincerely, Sara

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021

I really appreciate the review and your comments.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I took a walk with you here and I would have liked to know where it is you walk to see such wonderful sights, or are they in your imagination, either way, I enjoyed your words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2021

The sights are mostly in my imagination. I thank you most heartily for reviewing and appreciate your comments.

Comment from scongrove

Exceptional

Bravo! This is outstanding writing! Beautifully written and lovely descriptions. You definitely deserve to win the contest!

Thanks for sharing. I really enjoyed reading this. You have a talent for sure!

Sincerely,
Shana :)

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you, Shana, my dear friend, for your lovely words of encouragement.
Hugs,
Faye

reply by scongrove on 02-Mar-2021

You are very welcome and truly talented! :)

reply by the author on 02-Mar-2021

Thank you so much!
Blessings,
Faye

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

FM Wright,

This is a most gorgeous rhyming poem entry you have written.
I enjoyed every part of it and. Lovely invitational stanzas with
"Come walk with me" Fantastic imagery throughout!

Loved this part:

"Come walk with me into a forest serene,
as we saunter 'neath a canopy of green:
a place of quiet beauty that rests the soul:
and in so doing does make the spirit whole."

Best wishes in the contest,
Anna

 Comment Written 01-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

I thank you ever so much for your review. I truly appreciate your comments.

reply by AnnaLinda on 01-Mar-2021

My pleasure.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

Come walk with me and the universe will open the door to a wonderful world :"Come walk with me along a sand laden shore:
pick up a seashell and hear the ocean roar;
brought by the waves as they come rushing to land.
A scene repeated almost since time began." Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you ever so much for your review and good luck wish.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Here in this poem is a wholehearted and fulsome invitation to the beloved to undertake the journey of life together , come what may, despite the inevitable obstacles

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you ever so much for your comments. I do appreciate your review.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Well done on this cleverly crafted Rhyming Verse. It is perfect for the contest and does show the the use of wonderful rhyme choices and meaningful theme. I enjoyed reading it. All my best.

Melissa

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you ever so much for your review. I truly appreciate your comments.