Out of My Grave
When Jesus Calls14 total reviews
Comment from Mastery
Good morning, Jan. Very beautiful and inspiring use of 15 syllables here, my friend. Would it not be great if we could know such action to be truly forthcoming?
Before I forget would you please tell Linda, I absolutely love her painting. bless you, Bob
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Good morning, Jan. Very beautiful and inspiring use of 15 syllables here, my friend. Would it not be great if we could know such action to be truly forthcoming?
Before I forget would you please tell Linda, I absolutely love her painting. bless you, Bob
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I will be glad to tell Linda that. I believe with all my heart it will be truly forthcoming. Jan
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Thank you, Jan. Bob
Comment from Paul Borders
Howdy rdfrdmom2, I'll be right there with ya when my name is called too. What a pleasant submission. I shall give it my vote when the booths open. Best of luck to ya.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Howdy rdfrdmom2, I'll be right there with ya when my name is called too. What a pleasant submission. I shall give it my vote when the booths open. Best of luck to ya.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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thanks so much, Paul. I'll be looking for you! Jan
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Out Of My Grave', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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'Out Of My Grave', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, duchess. Jan
Jan,
As always you're very welcome,
the Duchess
Comment from Gert sherwood
When Jesus Calls
Out of My Grave
Rdfrdmom2 Your poetic voice loud and clear of what what you would do if your name was called is what we all should do when we see Our Lord.
Gert
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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When Jesus Calls
Out of My Grave
Rdfrdmom2 Your poetic voice loud and clear of what what you would do if your name was called is what we all should do when we see Our Lord.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Gert: Yes, that's for sure. Rdfrdmom2
Comment from Jennifer L Newcomb
As days go by, I pray I don't stay the same
I want to get so close to him that there's no big change
On that day that Jesus calls my name!
Looking up waiting for the day when I can lay this chain of everlasting darkness down!!
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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As days go by, I pray I don't stay the same
I want to get so close to him that there's no big change
On that day that Jesus calls my name!
Looking up waiting for the day when I can lay this chain of everlasting darkness down!!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Oh, Jennifer, you are probably closer than you know. But, I do understand what you are saying. Rdfrdmom2
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I would all Christians would do the same. Your poem flows smoothly and gives a great message. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I would all Christians would do the same. Your poem flows smoothly and gives a great message. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thanks, again. It took me a bit to get my syllable count right and for it to flow smoothly, but I eventually got there. I think my muse has returned. Jan
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture. The colors give you a warm feeling.
The poem says: "that day Jesus calls my name, I will shoot up out of my grave..." shows faith in Jesus... People should have faith. Faith is the foundation of life support...
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I like the picture. The colors give you a warm feeling.
The poem says: "that day Jesus calls my name, I will shoot up out of my grave..." shows faith in Jesus... People should have faith. Faith is the foundation of life support...
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Yes, faith is the foundation of my life. jan
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the picture. The colors give you a warm feeling.
The poem says: "that day Jesus calls my name, I will shoot up out of my grave..." shows faith in Jesus... People should have faith. Faith is the foundation of life support...
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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I like the picture. The colors give you a warm feeling.
The poem says: "that day Jesus calls my name, I will shoot up out of my grave..." shows faith in Jesus... People should have faith. Faith is the foundation of life support...
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you, again. jan
Comment from padumachitta
hello
Well, i can't say i understand this, or rather maybe i do. I am guesiing you are writing about the revelation.
But, well...jumping up outa a grave when called makes for a startling peom.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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hello
Well, i can't say i understand this, or rather maybe i do. I am guesiing you are writing about the revelation.
But, well...jumping up outa a grave when called makes for a startling peom.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Yes, I am talking about the 2nd coming of Christ. If He does not come while I am still alive, I look forward to shooting out of my grave which will not be able to hold me just as it could not hold Him. Jan
Comment from Nike23
Since you only have 15 syllables your choice of words have to be chosen carefully especially to get your point across. You have done a good job here. The reader is given a complete poem. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Since you only have 15 syllables your choice of words have to be chosen carefully especially to get your point across. You have done a good job here. The reader is given a complete poem. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Nike23. Jan