It Is Finished
Jesus' Final Words33 total reviews
Comment from Zan Zan
Aweeeeee Thank you, Abba.
We love and appreciate you so much, even tho our actions don't match up...
I know he's smiling down on this little piece. I loved loved loved this.
~Six Stars ~
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Aweeeeee Thank you, Abba.
We love and appreciate you so much, even tho our actions don't match up...
I know he's smiling down on this little piece. I loved loved loved this.
~Six Stars ~
Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thank you for your review, very kind comments, and six-star rating.
Blessings...
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a good contest entry. One suggestion: Our Lord and Savior (was) crucified -- since He's one person. I like the repetition of the two lines; they show the finishing of the work of Christ and of the payment for sin. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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This is a good contest entry. One suggestion: Our Lord and Savior (was) crucified -- since He's one person. I like the repetition of the two lines; they show the finishing of the work of Christ and of the payment for sin. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Carol,
Thank you for your review, very kind comments, and suggestion; they are greatly appreciated.
Blessings...
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You're welcome. I hope it does well.
Comment from Carlos' girl
Oh now This Is A BEAUTIFULLY written poem.about a most beautiful subject. I love it
Small correction to Title : should be "Finished". Not "Finish."
You bring the point home well and use great language
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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Oh now This Is A BEAUTIFULLY written poem.about a most beautiful subject. I love it
Small correction to Title : should be "Finished". Not "Finish."
You bring the point home well and use great language
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Comment Written 17-Jun-2021
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and very kind comments. Thanks for bringing the error to my attention.
Blessings...
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Xoxo
