Comment from Sally Law

Exceptional

Exceptional short verse, dear Faye, and six worthy. The chosen art goes well with your fine work. Marvelous offering!
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs...xo....

 Comment Written 07-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Mar-2021

Thank you ever so much for your comments.I appreciate you and your suppoirt very much.
Blessings,
Faye

Comment from Edward Escobar

Excellent

That was one excellent piece, third and fourth line quite extraordinary,
how emptiness of a love gone can resemble an empty tomb inside. Much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2021

Thank you for your wonderful comments. Your review is truly appreciated.

Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

Indeed, I totally agree dear anonymous! You have written a heartwrenching poem that dives deep into the soul.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

Thank you for your comments, the good luck and the latger than life hug.

Comment from Jimmy Hogg

Excellent

Very good, I'm enjoying this short, immediate poetry style. Such a skill to be able to say so much with so few words.

I particularly like the double meaning of the "empty tomb inside" v clever.

Thanks

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

Thank you for your review and comments. I appreciate you taking the time to read my poem.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very sad poem with deep emotions of a proper place for a love one to die
so creative with heartstrings
outstanding in so many ways
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with the photo in your well penned poem
I hope for the best in the contest

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

Thank you for your review, comments and good luck wish.
They are all appreciated.