Stepping Through Life
Live each day as if your last71 total reviews
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is lovely, Bill. We need to keep a positive cheerful attitude every day if we possibly can. Life is hard enough without inviting stress. Thank you for reminding us. Well done. Have a great week my friend. Nancy:)
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This is lovely, Bill. We need to keep a positive cheerful attitude every day if we possibly can. Life is hard enough without inviting stress. Thank you for reminding us. Well done. Have a great week my friend. Nancy:)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from Mastery
Hi Jay. as I have oft said, you are a poetic genius. The words to this particular poem flow so very well indeed.
"Hold fast desires, to them be true
and they, in turn will see you through."
A special poem here. Bob
ps. If you ever have time would you look in my folio for a poem called "Stepping Stones? " And let me know what you think. Thank you, Bob
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Hi Jay. as I have oft said, you are a poetic genius. The words to this particular poem flow so very well indeed.
"Hold fast desires, to them be true
and they, in turn will see you through."
A special poem here. Bob
ps. If you ever have time would you look in my folio for a poem called "Stepping Stones? " And let me know what you think. Thank you, Bob
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from karenina
Love your poetry...and the life experience and wisdom you bring to your insights. They never fail to lift me up in spirit and intention to "do better" for others and therefore for my spirits!--Karenina
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Love your poetry...and the life experience and wisdom you bring to your insights. They never fail to lift me up in spirit and intention to "do better" for others and therefore for my spirits!--Karenina
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from phil nelson
Your poems have become excellent teaching materials, and I am glad that you have deigned to share your great wisdom with all of us here--I hope that there will be a book or three in the offing soon--it would be a terrific collection for young and old alike.
All the Best!
Phil
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Your poems have become excellent teaching materials, and I am glad that you have deigned to share your great wisdom with all of us here--I hope that there will be a book or three in the offing soon--it would be a terrific collection for young and old alike.
All the Best!
Phil
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This is so cute, we can use it as a motto:"
Don't let fears or indignation
step upon your inspiration.
Hold fast desires, to them be true
and they, in turn will see you through." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
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This is so cute, we can use it as a motto:"
Don't let fears or indignation
step upon your inspiration.
Hold fast desires, to them be true
and they, in turn will see you through." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from LJbutterfly
The last lines of the last stanza is so true, "Hold fast desires, to them be true and they in turn will see you through." If your desire is to follow the advice so creatively expressed in the first three stanzas, then your desires WILL see you through. I always enjoy your work and appreciate your messages for a successful life. Well done.
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The last lines of the last stanza is so true, "Hold fast desires, to them be true and they in turn will see you through." If your desire is to follow the advice so creatively expressed in the first three stanzas, then your desires WILL see you through. I always enjoy your work and appreciate your messages for a successful life. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from jenintorre
Jaybird your poems are so motivating and this one is no exception. I really enjoyed reading it and feel inspired. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Jen.
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Jaybird your poems are so motivating and this one is no exception. I really enjoyed reading it and feel inspired. Thanks for sharing. Take care. Jen.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Live each day as if your last
Stepping Through Life
by jaybird1
Hello, Mr Jay,
You give solid advice. Everything passes with time. It's better to remain calm and hopeful. Well done.
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Live each day as if your last
Stepping Through Life
by jaybird1
Hello, Mr Jay,
You give solid advice. Everything passes with time. It's better to remain calm and hopeful. Well done.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
Enjoyed reading your poem your words are so true. You captured my attention from the first line to the last
would you believe years ago I wrote a poem to my daughter who passed away when I find it I will post it
Its about stairs also
cookie
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Enjoyed reading your poem your words are so true. You captured my attention from the first line to the last
would you believe years ago I wrote a poem to my daughter who passed away when I find it I will post it
Its about stairs also
cookie
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from Susan Newell
I love your easy style, always filled with good advice for having a better life experience. You seem to get the principle of holding tight to the good and casting off the bad. Thanks for the read.
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I love your easy style, always filled with good advice for having a better life experience. You seem to get the principle of holding tight to the good and casting off the bad. Thanks for the read.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
