Stepping Through Life
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
Life has ups and downs. The advice from your poem is worth listening to...
"Let peace and kindness, friendships grow."... and
"Hold fast desires, to them be trueand they, in turn will see you through."
No matter under how bad a situation is, don't give up.
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Life has ups and downs. The advice from your poem is worth listening to...
"Let peace and kindness, friendships grow."... and
"Hold fast desires, to them be trueand they, in turn will see you through."
No matter under how bad a situation is, don't give up.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from QC Poet
A very Inspirational and Upbeat Forward Hopefulness to this Great Uplifting poem offering. Thank you for Sharing this Heartfelt Writing with FS. Blessings to you.
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A very Inspirational and Upbeat Forward Hopefulness to this Great Uplifting poem offering. Thank you for Sharing this Heartfelt Writing with FS. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from palmart
More than a poem, your writing is a Bible of advices for we to follow. I really recover the part "nothing's the same along the way" as it is not only the way that changes, but this external alterations modify us -the walkers-internally. Result? We change along the way of life. What we did not like decades ago, now we love it. A proverb expresses these changes and defines innovation: "not new things, but in a new way". Thanks for illustrating our lives with your poetry!
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More than a poem, your writing is a Bible of advices for we to follow. I really recover the part "nothing's the same along the way" as it is not only the way that changes, but this external alterations modify us -the walkers-internally. Result? We change along the way of life. What we did not like decades ago, now we love it. A proverb expresses these changes and defines innovation: "not new things, but in a new way". Thanks for illustrating our lives with your poetry!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jay, what doesn't kill us....makes us stronger...
and we truly do learn wisdom through each part
of our journey...
it's better my sweet friend to be kind and thoughtful to others...smile...makes people smile as well...
I love your poem...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Jay, what doesn't kill us....makes us stronger...
and we truly do learn wisdom through each part
of our journey...
it's better my sweet friend to be kind and thoughtful to others...smile...makes people smile as well...
I love your poem...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from tfawcus
Wise advice from Jaybird here. Time rolls on regardless. We may as well make the best of it, enjoy the present moment and live life to the full while we still have it. As you say, bad times pass - as long as you let them.
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Wise advice from Jaybird here. Time rolls on regardless. We may as well make the best of it, enjoy the present moment and live life to the full while we still have it. As you say, bad times pass - as long as you let them.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from AnnaLinda
Jaybird,
Thank you so much for your wise poetic advice sent by your positive song with well rhymed lines and tried and true truths are much appreciated.
Anna
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Jaybird,
Thank you so much for your wise poetic advice sent by your positive song with well rhymed lines and tried and true truths are much appreciated.
Anna
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from June Sargent
Trying to hang tough, , but my arms are getting mighty tired! I agree - we need to maintain and share a positive attitude with others. Life is much more enjoyable when we inspire one another.
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Trying to hang tough, , but my arms are getting mighty tired! I agree - we need to maintain and share a positive attitude with others. Life is much more enjoyable when we inspire one another.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Stepping Through Life', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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'Stepping Through Life', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Jaybird. You've written another excellent poem. I like the sound of it and the images I see when reading it. Good work.
Good luck in the contest, Jaybird. I hope you win.
Have a nice weekend.
Blessings,
Cindy
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Jaybird. You've written another excellent poem. I like the sound of it and the images I see when reading it. Good work.
Good luck in the contest, Jaybird. I hope you win.
Have a nice weekend.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this good encouragement, Jaybird. With God's help, we won't let fears or indignation step upon our inspiration." God will see us through the difficult times.
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Thank you for this good encouragement, Jaybird. With God's help, we won't let fears or indignation step upon our inspiration." God will see us through the difficult times.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
