Stepping Through Life
Live each day as if your last71 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
I really enjoy your metre on this poem. It has a jaunt in its feet, as the message is upbeat with lots of change along life's path.
Happy day to you my friend and many more to follow. :)
Gloria
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I really enjoy your metre on this poem. It has a jaunt in its feet, as the message is upbeat with lots of change along life's path.
Happy day to you my friend and many more to follow. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Thanks for your note and poem, jaybird.
-A very well written poem with
many good ideas.
-I like the description of the seasons
and the flowers in verse one.
-That is nicely followed by
"springtime of life."
-Very good closing stanzas, too.
-You always have a very good
message in your work.
-Have a good evening and a good
day tomorrow and the rest of the week!
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-Thanks for your note and poem, jaybird.
-A very well written poem with
many good ideas.
-I like the description of the seasons
and the flowers in verse one.
-That is nicely followed by
"springtime of life."
-Very good closing stanzas, too.
-You always have a very good
message in your work.
-Have a good evening and a good
day tomorrow and the rest of the week!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from joycetreasures
Hi Jaybird1,
I totally concur with your author's notes, " Hang tough through the bad times, the good times will return to you. I agree we should our life like it's the last day on earth. Great rhyming in your poem. Your last stanza is beautifully written and nice flow. Well done and a wonderful message.
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Hi Jaybird1,
I totally concur with your author's notes, " Hang tough through the bad times, the good times will return to you. I agree we should our life like it's the last day on earth. Great rhyming in your poem. Your last stanza is beautifully written and nice flow. Well done and a wonderful message.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from Ben Colder
Don't let fears or indignation
step upon your inspiration.
Good advice.
I was thinking about something I read say Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
Thanks for sharing.
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Don't let fears or indignation
step upon your inspiration.
Good advice.
I was thinking about something I read say Today is the first day of the rest of my life.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from nancyjam
Wise words and good advice for all. There will always be bad times and good times, we just need to think positive, be true to ourselves and our beliefs, be kind to others and the world will look better.
Nancy
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Wise words and good advice for all. There will always be bad times and good times, we just need to think positive, be true to ourselves and our beliefs, be kind to others and the world will look better.
Nancy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
This is an excellent commentary and advice for life - I particularly like these two lines:
Don't let fears or indignation
step upon your inspiration.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
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This is an excellent commentary and advice for life - I particularly like these two lines:
Don't let fears or indignation
step upon your inspiration.
Thank you for sharing!
Susan
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from Laurie Holding
Beautiful, sage advice from one of my favorite poets on FanStory! Thanks for this little nugget of wisdom, Jaybird! I enjoy your perfect cadence and rhyme.
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Beautiful, sage advice from one of my favorite poets on FanStory! Thanks for this little nugget of wisdom, Jaybird! I enjoy your perfect cadence and rhyme.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from mermaids
I like your theme that the good times will return,relevant words for today's world. You have a smooth poetic flow of words that adds to the strength of your theme. Listen to friend is great advice and can help us on the road of life.
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I like your theme that the good times will return,relevant words for today's world. You have a smooth poetic flow of words that adds to the strength of your theme. Listen to friend is great advice and can help us on the road of life.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from Patty Palmer
It's so true that when things seem to be too much to handle emotionally, just remember that things will get better again. I always think that it might be bad today but tomorrow may be a whole different story. When we were kids and things seemed to be not so good, my mother would always remind us that This too shall pass! Good job!
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It's so true that when things seem to be too much to handle emotionally, just remember that things will get better again. I always think that it might be bad today but tomorrow may be a whole different story. When we were kids and things seemed to be not so good, my mother would always remind us that This too shall pass! Good job!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
Comment from Jimmy Hogg
This is good. I like the simplicity, and it's very approachable, when a lot of poetry can be quite navel-gazing and impenetrable. Thanks for sharing, good luck.
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This is good. I like the simplicity, and it's very approachable, when a lot of poetry can be quite navel-gazing and impenetrable. Thanks for sharing, good luck.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
