Stepping Through Life
Live each day as if your last71 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The good advice you render in your poems is always welcome and enjoyed. Your poetry is ever rhythmic and lilting with lessons of great value sprinkled throughout. If you have followed your good advice, you must be a very contented person. Bless you Jaybird!
Ralf
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The good advice you render in your poems is always welcome and enjoyed. Your poetry is ever rhythmic and lilting with lessons of great value sprinkled throughout. If you have followed your good advice, you must be a very contented person. Bless you Jaybird!
Ralf
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from lance michaels
A very inspiring and cheerful poem. Such a wonderful message that we could all live by. Simple but elegant words of wisdom. I enjoyed reading that poem very much. I was feeling a little down today, but your words gave me a much-needed lift!
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A very inspiring and cheerful poem. Such a wonderful message that we could all live by. Simple but elegant words of wisdom. I enjoyed reading that poem very much. I was feeling a little down today, but your words gave me a much-needed lift!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from LaTessa
This is a great poem! I love the message in it and it flowed nicely. I've learned that even during the bad times of life it's better to stay positive and press through because after every storm comes a rainbow. Well done :)
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This is a great poem! I love the message in it and it flowed nicely. I've learned that even during the bad times of life it's better to stay positive and press through because after every storm comes a rainbow. Well done :)
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from Poetofheart2013
What a very beautiful and
Up beat poem full of
good and postive thoughts and feelings.
Made me feel better just
reading it and left me
with good feeling. I
Really enjoyed reading
it. Keep up the good work!
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What a very beautiful and
Up beat poem full of
good and postive thoughts and feelings.
Made me feel better just
reading it and left me
with good feeling. I
Really enjoyed reading
it. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from roof35
You have given lots of good advice in this lovely poem. It is well written and has the reader looking for the positive things in life. This is very nicely done.
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You have given lots of good advice in this lovely poem. It is well written and has the reader looking for the positive things in life. This is very nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from rjuselius
Aaawwweee this is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear jaybird! I sincerely appreciate and enjoy your poetry. You have truly made it an art form!
Thank you for sharing a smile!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
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Aaawwweee this is such a sweetheart piece of poetry dear jaybird! I sincerely appreciate and enjoy your poetry. You have truly made it an art form!
Thank you for sharing a smile!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from RShipp
Great advice for a locked-down world!
Holding true to friendships is a difficult thing. Zoom meetings just aren't the same.
Well done. I enjoyed the read!!!
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Great advice for a locked-down world!
Holding true to friendships is a difficult thing. Zoom meetings just aren't the same.
Well done. I enjoyed the read!!!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from Paul Borders
Yet another insightful FanStory poem by my fellow Kentuckian jaybird1. I wish you luck in the contest and hope you are one of the top three finishers.
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Yet another insightful FanStory poem by my fellow Kentuckian jaybird1. I wish you luck in the contest and hope you are one of the top three finishers.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Yes. I believe that we need to walk through the righteous path in life and fight for what is right than doing nothing. As always your poems rhyme well and prove to be inspirational. Thank you for sharing!
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Yes. I believe that we need to walk through the righteous path in life and fight for what is right than doing nothing. As always your poems rhyme well and prove to be inspirational. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
Comment from Yvon
Very nice. The rhyming had a nice flow but it was the words of wisdom that kept me reading. I see from your date of birth that you have lived through much. What you say is good for the masses!
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Very nice. The rhyming had a nice flow but it was the words of wisdom that kept me reading. I see from your date of birth that you have lived through much. What you say is good for the masses!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
