Potlatch 2021
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Comment from donette1914
adorable of chasing rabbits so exciting in her dreams
so creative and heartfelt
outstanding
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with the photo in your well penned poem
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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adorable of chasing rabbits so exciting in her dreams
so creative and heartfelt
outstanding
you brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with the photo in your well penned poem
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your kind feedback, Donette :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Susan Newell
I agree with everything in your poem and notes. The flicks of tails, striding paws and sniffs of air can be so funny to watch. I really do wonder if they are chasing rabbits or playing with friends.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I agree with everything in your poem and notes. The flicks of tails, striding paws and sniffs of air can be so funny to watch. I really do wonder if they are chasing rabbits or playing with friends.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback, Susan :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks you love to watch your dog as she sleeps as she runs chase and leap after the rabbits in her dreams; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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This poem speaks you love to watch your dog as she sleeps as she runs chase and leap after the rabbits in her dreams; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your feedback, Alcreator :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Cogitator
I am owned by two shelter dogs and they have trained me very well. One even talks in her sleep. She dreams of her next lesson for me. Great and delightful is unconditional love....John
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I am owned by two shelter dogs and they have trained me very well. One even talks in her sleep. She dreams of her next lesson for me. Great and delightful is unconditional love....John
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Isn't it just! I love your comments :)
Thanks and best wishes, Debra
Comment from Vanna1
Good presentation, your dog gets to sleep on the bed?! Wow spoiled! Great flow to your words. I enjoyed reading your piece. It was fun with good word choice. Interesting format. Thanks for sharing.
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Good presentation, your dog gets to sleep on the bed?! Wow spoiled! Great flow to your words. I enjoyed reading your piece. It was fun with good word choice. Interesting format. Thanks for sharing.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Hi Vanna :) Thanks for your feedback!
The dog in the photo isn't our dog. Ours sleeps in her own dog bed! She's not even allowed upstairs (unless the kids sneak her up there!)
Best wishes, Debra
