Potlatch 2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Chasing Rabbits"Potlatch Club Submissions 2021
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Comment from Pearl Edwards
Yes, isn't it funny to wonder what dogs are dreaming about when you hear them making little noises, their ears twitching, sometimes their feet moving, it's intriguing, and your Molly came up well in your Triolet poem for the Potlatch Club, enjoyed it,
cheers.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Yes, isn't it funny to wonder what dogs are dreaming about when you hear them making little noises, their ears twitching, sometimes their feet moving, it's intriguing, and your Molly came up well in your Triolet poem for the Potlatch Club, enjoyed it,
cheers.
Comment Written 28-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your lovely feedback, Pearl :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Lulube
I bet she's a wonderful 4th kid in the family. It's amazing how they twitch and moan, even whimper in their sleep, I think the bunny dream is probably right. Good read.
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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I bet she's a wonderful 4th kid in the family. It's amazing how they twitch and moan, even whimper in their sleep, I think the bunny dream is probably right. Good read.
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Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Hi Lulube :) She's the best fur baby ever!
Thanks so much for the read and review,
Best wishes as always, Debra x
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The ones that stay home.
lulube
Comment from Begin Again
I loved your poem. I have a black and white cocker who has those adventures in his dreams too. Often, he will snap awake and stand guard as he barks. He is blind but I think his dreams still take him to those wonderful days. Smiles to you!
Lincoln sends his regards to Molly!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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I loved your poem. I have a black and white cocker who has those adventures in his dreams too. Often, he will snap awake and stand guard as he barks. He is blind but I think his dreams still take him to those wonderful days. Smiles to you!
Lincoln sends his regards to Molly!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your lovely feedback! Molly and I appreciate it :)
Sending our best to you and Lincoln x
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Chasing Rabbits', is a well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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'Chasing Rabbits', is a well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your feedback :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from robyn corum
Debra,
What fun! I love watching our dog in the middle of his dreams. I always think: what are you doing over there??!!! He'll run and whine and twitch. It's so entertaining. hahaha
Thanks!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Debra,
What fun! I love watching our dog in the middle of his dreams. I always think: what are you doing over there??!!! He'll run and whine and twitch. It's so entertaining. hahaha
Thanks!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much, Robyn :)
Best wishes as always, Debra
Comment from royowen
It is fascinating to watch one's animals sleep, it's amazing but they all seem to dream, both cats and dogs. Particularly the dogs, the twitch, woof and can't keep still sometimes, beautifully written Triolet Debra, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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It is fascinating to watch one's animals sleep, it's amazing but they all seem to dream, both cats and dogs. Particularly the dogs, the twitch, woof and can't keep still sometimes, beautifully written Triolet Debra, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Roy :) I appreciate your lovely feedback.
Best wishes, Debra
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Most welcome Debra
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chraming--indeed, it does speak for itself! I read a fascinating book on neuroscience that described studies that not only confirmed that animals dream but that also discerned the specifics, e.g. chasing, eating ...
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Chraming--indeed, it does speak for itself! I read a fascinating book on neuroscience that described studies that not only confirmed that animals dream but that also discerned the specifics, e.g. chasing, eating ...
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Hi Liz, thank you for your feedback. Much appreciated :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from damommy
I wonder about animals' dreams. Especially dogs who seems to be chasing something that, when awake, they've probably never encountered. I had a Great Dane that would yip like a puppy in his dreams.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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I wonder about animals' dreams. Especially dogs who seems to be chasing something that, when awake, they've probably never encountered. I had a Great Dane that would yip like a puppy in his dreams.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your comments :)
Best wishes, Debra
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
They do twitch, don't they!! lol. I'm sure they do dream of nice things. This is a lovely triolet, Debra, you've done well for this weeks Potlatch Poetry, and you chose a lovely topic. Molly! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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They do twitch, don't they!! lol. I'm sure they do dream of nice things. This is a lovely triolet, Debra, you've done well for this weeks Potlatch Poetry, and you chose a lovely topic. Molly! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Sandra :)
I'm glad you enjoyed!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You obviously have great affection for this beautiful dog and she is very comfortable and sleeps without any fear of being disturbed. Your poem is sweetly seasoned with dreams and love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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You obviously have great affection for this beautiful dog and she is very comfortable and sleeps without any fear of being disturbed. Your poem is sweetly seasoned with dreams and love, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, Dolly :)
You're right, I love her to bits!
Best wishes as always, Debra x
