Comment from T.E. Loper

Excellent

I really liked this poem. Indubitably! Of course, if what I'm reading between the lines is correct, we lean in the same direction, so there's that. The simplicity of this poem makes it very powerful, and the gentle rhymes are, dare I say it: "nice!"

Congratulations on your third-place finish. You're in very good company, don't you know.

Tom

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

Tom, your comments about reading between the lines is for both of us spot on! And hanging with the big dogs with 3rd place on this subject is satisfying. have a great weekend.

reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

Tom, your comments about reading between the lines is for both of us spot on! And hanging with the big dogs with 3rd place on this subject is satisfying. have a great weekend.

reply by T.E. Loper on 20-Feb-2021

Thanks, JLR! You too.

Comment from L. Kalere

Excellent

I think you did an excellent job of staying within the myriad of rules for this contest. And, you have an admirable solution to the crazy world of politics. I think this is an excellent contender.
Linda

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

Hi Linda, thank you, neutral and hopeful!

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is a good presentation with a good visual to go with your writing. I like the guidlines of this contest-it is refreshing. Well done and respectful writing. All the best to you.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2021

I agree with the guidelines. It should be the prerequisite requirement for all in public office, in my humble opinion.

reply by equestrik on 20-Feb-2021

yes indeed!

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Nicely written poem about what is going on with our country at this present time. Things just look so bleak at this time, I don't know where it will all end. Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
Patty

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021

Thanks Patty

Comment from Jimmy Hogg

Excellent

Hmmm, cool, I liked this. Need read any political poetry really. I like the balance- it's hard to argue with. And the "-ally" ending are very satisfying.

Thanks for posting.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021

I do thank you, I really tried to reflect neutrality which is what our country needs to heal.

Comment from Sanku

Excellent

This is a good definition of democrats and a rational explanation for the republican attitudes.but statesmanship and respect is the much needed quality of the hour.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021

Thank you Sanku...Yes we are far past the need to save our system.

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

This is a good poem outlining who the two major parties (Democrats and Republicans) are, what they represent and what hey want to accomplish.

After-all, I like: "As an American, I favor statesmanship and
respectful negotiation, providentially."

Best luck to your contest. This one is a winning one.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021

Thank you I appreciate your validation

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

This is a good piece, as you have been impartial following the rules, and also given your viewpoint respectfully. The poem flows well, so I wish you success in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2021

WENDY, thank you for the validation

Comment from Reese Turner

Excellent

O.K. so you know what you favor.
Have you set specific limits on what you will not accept?
Favoring is passive. Defending what is ours is aggressive.
Aggressive is not pretty, soft or cuddly, but neither are the alternatives.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

Thanks

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

America 'tis of Thee
Political conundrums


Hello anonymous

Excellent entry for the Nice U.S. Political Poem writing prompt contest. You were clear and concise. I enjoyed reading your poem. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

Thanks