Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Morning Grandeur
by Debra White

Hello, Debra,

Beautiful entry for the "Ekphrastic Contemporary Haiku" for the haiku club challenge. You interpreted the picture perfectly. Good use of imagery. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Well done!!!

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your kind and reassuring feedback, Gypsy. I appreciate it! Best wishes, Debra :)

Comment from Lulube

Exceptional

And a terrific haiku!!! The last line sums up the first two lines. Well done!!

WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
lulube

 Comment Written 21-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2021

Thanks so much, Lulube, for the very generous 6 star rating of my haiku :) You've made my day! Best wishes, Debra x

reply by Lulube on 21-Feb-2021

welcome, a great first try, in masterful technique.

lulube

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Elegant and fresh imagery do justice to this stunning photo--I saw another entry with this pic--per notes, I see the pic is provided. This lovely haiku is all the more impressive given this powerful visual image you must contend with!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thank you for your lovely feedback, Elizabeth :)
Best wishes, Debra

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Debra,

I like the idea of those orbs lined up so appealingly - almost standing to attention, army-style! I wonder if there's an inspection coming soon. hahaha

This was sweet and I enjoyed it very much!

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Hi Robyn :) Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think you've done an excellent job of this haiku Debra, the lead in to the satori line was marvellous and everything seemed that you were an experienced Japanese form poet, well done, good job, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Hi Roy :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra

reply by royowen on 17-Feb-2021

Most welcome

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

simply lovely
outstanding!!!
your brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable with a beautiful photo
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Hi donette :) Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra

Comment from RetroStarfish

Excellent

Nicely done. I am a sucker for alliteration - especially when accomplished in the strict format of the Haiku. The artwork adds to the enjoyment.
Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Hi :) Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

This is a well written answer to this ekphrastic haiku challenge. It describes the artwork perfectly and has a feeling of religious praise in
the last line.
Keep writing and stay healthy
dragonpoet

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Hi dragonpoet :) Thank you for your feedback. Best wishes, Debra

reply by dragonpoet on 17-Feb-2021

You?re welcome, Debra.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoy the morning dew and and you brought some soothing words here Debra, scenes of hopeful nature, and I enjoyed your few uplifting words, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Hi Dolly :) Thank you for your lovely feedback. Best wishes, Debra