Comment from Erika Seshadri

Good

Good evening, this is an interesting piece of writing. There was one thing that was really distracting to me... I don't know how this story looks on your screen, but every sentence that did not have an exclamation point had a question mark... maybe there is something wrong with the formatting through the website?

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

I just checked and put a small edit on this and someone suggested I continue this as a broken start characters which I did but what you're stating about distraction I don't understand why you can't accept the fact that there's explanation points in? In my writings?
Plus there's nothing wrong with the formatting and not every piece has an exclamation point or ? Mark.
I would suggest that you reread it properly this time.
I don't expect people to change their ratings on my works because they don't understand it.
I just appreciate that when people review that they read the editors notes and then also rate it and review it based on the content not on grammar.
I was reviewing an 18 year old young woman who's written a book here she's just started college.
I've had reviews as far as one star to six stores and it does not matter a damn thing.
This site is based on your popularity level as to how many reviews you do the more you do the more you can boast and build your own ratings.
I could care less
Doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Erika Seshadri on 18-Feb-2021

I was simply saying there might be a problem with the way the website was formatting your writing and you should check and see if that's the case. No need to jump down my throat and take it as an insult.

For example, this is a sentence from your reply above:

"I don't understand why you can't accept the fact that there's explanation points in? In my writings?"

Why is the first question mark there? It looks like it's been inserted by accident or by a computer glitch. That's what I'm trying to point out.

I said absolutely nothing about your "explanation" points.

Also, part of being a good writer is being able to connect with your audience. If people can't understand what you are writing, what's the point of sharing it?

Anyway, I was just trying to be helpful. As a result of your response, I will be certain to keep my opinions of your work to myself.

I wish you nothing but the best. Please leave me alone.

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

I appreciate your timely response and I have no feelings or regrets when it comes to anybody when it comes to my writings or anybody's writing here on Facebook I've been here over a decade.
Ricky

reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021

I appreciate your timely response and I have no feelings or regrets when it comes to anybody when it comes to my writings or anybody's writing here on Facebook I've been here over a decade.
Ricky

Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

I think you could flesh this out into a book. Are detective Nick and Rich Nick the same guy? That was kind of confusing there. You might want to add a cast of characters in the author's notes. Good luck.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021

Thanks for the tip Earl I just utilize it.
Doctor Ricky 1024