Heaven's Tears
A 5-7-5 about loss2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
There is no way to prepare for a loved one's death. The Speaker's faith helps her as even angels cried when her spouse reached heaven. We hope she will find strength and comfort in the Lord.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
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There is no way to prepare for a loved one's death. The Speaker's faith helps her as even angels cried when her spouse reached heaven. We hope she will find strength and comfort in the Lord.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your review. I greatly appreciate your comments.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Poet,
I think you've created a 5-7-5 that most all readers could identify with.
Your last line serves as a comforting satori. Your form is perfect as well as your presentation and well suited title.
Very great entry for the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest,
Anna
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
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Poet,
I think you've created a 5-7-5 that most all readers could identify with.
Your last line serves as a comforting satori. Your form is perfect as well as your presentation and well suited title.
Very great entry for the prompt.
Best wishes in the contest,
Anna
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much. I greatly appreciate your comments and best wishes.
