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Icicle Ambrosia

Melting icicles are a child's delight!

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Yes, catching snow flakes on your tongue is a fun childhood thing to do.
Though drip drop drip sounds more like iciles melting at the possible start of Spring than a snowy day.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2021

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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This is a great pairing of words to image to inspiration, Mystery Author. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Good job with the syllable count per line. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
    Thank you for this kind and supportive review. By the way, my heartiest congratulations to your recent achievement, well deserved.
    With appreciation,
    Anon
Comment from Susan Larson
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Interesting! Having grown up In one of the snowiest places in the north , I remember
Trying to catch snowflakes on my tongue., but never dripping icicle. What a fun sight that must be.

 Comment Written 15-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
    It definitely is fun to watch. This was a fun task, wish I'd had more syllables to work with. Thank you for reading.
    Anon