Memories
Trip to Jamaica9 total reviews
Comment from Patty Palmer
First of all congratulations on your new marriage! You make a great looking couple. Your poem hits all the right spots. It sounds like a wonderful place for your honeymoon. I'm glad it turned out well because as I was reading about all the fun you guys had then you talked about COVID-19 and for a second I was worried that something had happened to one of you. Praise the Lord, that wasn't the case. Good luck with the contest! And I wish you both the best in your marriage!
Patty
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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First of all congratulations on your new marriage! You make a great looking couple. Your poem hits all the right spots. It sounds like a wonderful place for your honeymoon. I'm glad it turned out well because as I was reading about all the fun you guys had then you talked about COVID-19 and for a second I was worried that something had happened to one of you. Praise the Lord, that wasn't the case. Good luck with the contest! And I wish you both the best in your marriage!
Patty
Comment Written 16-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Comment from Goodadvicechan
Congratulations to your honey moon.
I have not been to Jamaica. It certainly sound fun and glad you like the water, swimming with the dolphin, enjoying the food and watching happily the dancers.
Good luck to your contest.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Congratulations to your honey moon.
I have not been to Jamaica. It certainly sound fun and glad you like the water, swimming with the dolphin, enjoying the food and watching happily the dancers.
Good luck to your contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Comment from Wendy G
This topic and these words are therefore a wonderful reminder of your honeymoon, and the very happy times you had. A lovely photo and a well written poem!
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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This topic and these words are therefore a wonderful reminder of your honeymoon, and the very happy times you had. A lovely photo and a well written poem!
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Beautiful entry for the
Use These Words writing prompt contest. You included all the right words in a natural way...not forced.
The Honey Moon sounds awesome.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Hello anonymous
Beautiful entry for the
Use These Words writing prompt contest. You included all the right words in a natural way...not forced.
The Honey Moon sounds awesome.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Comment from Supe
Lovely picture and so nice to go down memory lane with you. These are trying times we are in at the moment but they will come back and you will hopefully do it again sometime. I enjoyed this read from start to finish. It was a challenge with all those words that had to be included. Nice job.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Lovely picture and so nice to go down memory lane with you. These are trying times we are in at the moment but they will come back and you will hopefully do it again sometime. I enjoyed this read from start to finish. It was a challenge with all those words that had to be included. Nice job.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
At least you were able to get married and have your honeymoon, some couples have had their weddings cancelled as well as their holiday, it is so sad what has happened and I sincerely hope we can return to normality soon. It sounds like you had a wonderful honeymoon and you both look so happy in your photograph, I wish you lots of good wishes for your future together, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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At least you were able to get married and have your honeymoon, some couples have had their weddings cancelled as well as their holiday, it is so sad what has happened and I sincerely hope we can return to normality soon. It sounds like you had a wonderful honeymoon and you both look so happy in your photograph, I wish you lots of good wishes for your future together, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thank you Dolly 🙂
Comment from oliver818
That sounds like an amazing trip. I bet everyone wishes they had memories like that to fall back on. I'm sure you'll have the chance to do it again one of these days. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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That sounds like an amazing trip. I bet everyone wishes they had memories like that to fall back on. I'm sure you'll have the chance to do it again one of these days. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
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Comment from Stephen Allen Crow
Sounds, like a fun and beautiful honeymoon! Nice job with your contest entry and hope you guys had a nice Valentines Day, best wishes and good luck with the contest. <3
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Sounds, like a fun and beautiful honeymoon! Nice job with your contest entry and hope you guys had a nice Valentines Day, best wishes and good luck with the contest. <3
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
My husband (with our family, sometimes) and I have taken several trips down there, too, and you are right. It makes an amazing trip. No matter the occasion, we go back as often as possible.
You did a lovely job describing the experience, and your rhymes were nice, though I do wish your lines were of a more consistent length or pattern. It seems you have used all the required words, too.
One small note:
--> We had so much fun (lying) in the sun and
Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Dear Mystery Writer,
My husband (with our family, sometimes) and I have taken several trips down there, too, and you are right. It makes an amazing trip. No matter the occasion, we go back as often as possible.
You did a lovely job describing the experience, and your rhymes were nice, though I do wish your lines were of a more consistent length or pattern. It seems you have used all the required words, too.
One small note:
--> We had so much fun (lying) in the sun and
Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you