A Beach Day
A summer day on the beach for us.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Good use of all the words to cease a poem about a stroll on the beach. Seeing dolphins is an awesome experience.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
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Good use of all the words to cease a poem about a stroll on the beach. Seeing dolphins is an awesome experience.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 03-Jun-2021
Comment from LisaMay
I enjoyed this glimpse of an apparently perfect summer day, where life is the best. You've described it very well and have integrated the required words in a skilful way. I like "reeling ocean" as an image. This should add cheer to those members who are in the midst of wintry days.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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I enjoyed this glimpse of an apparently perfect summer day, where life is the best. You've described it very well and have integrated the required words in a skilful way. I like "reeling ocean" as an image. This should add cheer to those members who are in the midst of wintry days.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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I love the beach...the sound of waves crashing, seagulls flapping their wings, and people/children laughing. Thank you for reading.
With appreciation,
Anon
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have done a good job of smoothly including the required words. Your poem makes excellent use of specific details to convey a mood of excitement and enjoyment of the beach and all that comes with it.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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You have done a good job of smoothly including the required words. Your poem makes excellent use of specific details to convey a mood of excitement and enjoyment of the beach and all that comes with it.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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I love the beach...the sound of waves crashing, seagulls flapping their wings, and people/children laughing. Thank you for reading.
With appreciation,
Anon