willow pond cottage
ghost story3 total reviews
Comment from R. S. Leergaard
Sort of whimsical, but a very cute story. I kind of like the idea of ghost caretakers for a cemetary and its grounds, and having the 'crew' get an addition on a regular basis. Ver nice :)
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Sort of whimsical, but a very cute story. I kind of like the idea of ghost caretakers for a cemetary and its grounds, and having the 'crew' get an addition on a regular basis. Ver nice :)
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the review. It was a fun write, cheers.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, ghosts reunion and it gets a new member with every accident:"They're coming, Addie called down to Georgie as the familiar black cars cruised slowly down the tree lined road.
He placed her tea cup on the table and opened the window. They waved happily down to a young boy and Jack the dog playing in the garden.
Seth had joined them last year after an unfortunate house fire.
Look at that gorgeous arrangement dear and so many people. Oh my, she must have been loved." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Wow, ghosts reunion and it gets a new member with every accident:"They're coming, Addie called down to Georgie as the familiar black cars cruised slowly down the tree lined road.
He placed her tea cup on the table and opened the window. They waved happily down to a young boy and Jack the dog playing in the garden.
Seth had joined them last year after an unfortunate house fire.
Look at that gorgeous arrangement dear and so many people. Oh my, she must have been loved." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the kind review.
Maybe just the ones that can't cross over.
I might redo this one with a bit more descriptive writing describing the surroundings, cheers, j
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Chills! Startling twist on the usual--POV of the ghosts--brilliant flight of fancy and touching ending --observing her own funeral and knowing she was loved and will be missed.
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Chills! Startling twist on the usual--POV of the ghosts--brilliant flight of fancy and touching ending --observing her own funeral and knowing she was loved and will be missed.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review. Yeah, they are settled in the cottage and these somber burials are something they look forward to, a few times a week. Cheers, j
