Woo Hoo!
Take me away....10 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
This is so fun and I love the rhyming words you chose for it. Your verse is upbeat, humorous and relatable. I wish you much luck in the contest!!
Melissa
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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This is so fun and I love the rhyming words you chose for it. Your verse is upbeat, humorous and relatable. I wish you much luck in the contest!!
Melissa
Comment Written 22-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2021
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Thank you for going back to catch this. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
Lovely romance poetry, Sal. You so beautifully express your feelings for the man you love in this sweet, three-line poem. The rhymes work very well, and the video puts it to music! That's a lovely sunset.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Lovely romance poetry, Sal. You so beautifully express your feelings for the man you love in this sweet, three-line poem. The rhymes work very well, and the video puts it to music! That's a lovely sunset.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
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You're very welcome, as always.
Love and blessings, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written 1-6-1 poem. You take me to the yahoo woo. Awesome photo to go with your poem very fitting for your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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This is a nicely written 1-6-1 poem. You take me to the yahoo woo. Awesome photo to go with your poem very fitting for your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from LisaMay
I love the simplicity and exuberance of your poem, plus that Rita Coolidge song is very cool. Whether it is riding your beautiful horse, or thoughts of a beloved, that have lifted you up and brought the 'woo hoo' factor, your poem is a delight.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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I love the simplicity and exuberance of your poem, plus that Rita Coolidge song is very cool. Whether it is riding your beautiful horse, or thoughts of a beloved, that have lifted you up and brought the 'woo hoo' factor, your poem is a delight.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Lisa May!
Comment from E. Denison
Brief and to the point, this work is a great entry for the 1-6-1 contest. I appreciate the timeliness of the romance theme (since we're so close to Valentines Day), and the bonus video is a nice addition for context. The poem overall is lighter than a lot of the romance-themed works I've read today, which is refreshing. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Brief and to the point, this work is a great entry for the 1-6-1 contest. I appreciate the timeliness of the romance theme (since we're so close to Valentines Day), and the bonus video is a nice addition for context. The poem overall is lighter than a lot of the romance-themed works I've read today, which is refreshing. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from donette1914
very cute
your brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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very cute
your brought this to life with well chosen words with the story line
very believable
thank you for sharing it was a pleasure
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from victor 66
Romance, whether you are young or you are old, it is still a wonderful experience. At my age, I guess I could still get on a horse but I don't know how painful it would be getting off. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Romance, whether you are young or you are old, it is still a wonderful experience. At my age, I guess I could still get on a horse but I don't know how painful it would be getting off. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from lancellot
While, I like this poem and I really enjoy the excellent presentation of the background it matches the theme behind your words perfectly. I do see a major problem. The ending of your second line does rhyme with the first or third. You may want to rewrite that.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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While, I like this poem and I really enjoy the excellent presentation of the background it matches the theme behind your words perfectly. I do see a major problem. The ending of your second line does rhyme with the first or third. You may want to rewrite that.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you. I have repaired it . Copied and pasted the wrong lime from my iPad.
Sal xo
Comment from rspoet
Your poem is very good, but I don't think unknown rhymes
with you/woo, as the contest requires.
Otherwise, it is very good and many will relate.
Best wishes to you.
Good luck.
Robert
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Your poem is very good, but I don't think unknown rhymes
with you/woo, as the contest requires.
Otherwise, it is very good and many will relate.
Best wishes to you.
Good luck.
Robert
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you for pointing that out. I hadn't noticed I copied and pasted the wrong line from my notes. It's better now.
Comment from equestrik
Of course, as a horse lover, that is where I went with this. My horses have enriched my life in so many ways. your presentation is good and is well done. Best to you.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Of course, as a horse lover, that is where I went with this. My horses have enriched my life in so many ways. your presentation is good and is well done. Best to you.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
