Where Are All The Children
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Earth-Shattering Discovery"A vigilante takes down trafficing rings.
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Comment from Iza Deleanu
Oh no, the biggest pain of a mom is to give away her newborn baby and to go back to work carrying this burden inside her heart. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
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Oh no, the biggest pain of a mom is to give away her newborn baby and to go back to work carrying this burden inside her heart. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter and enthusiastic review. You're right, losing the baby will kill Anna. Hopefully, someone will think of something quick.
Thank you again for all your support, friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from Sugarray77
Your writing is sooo good. You continue to keep this very interesting with high tension, good dialogue and a sensible and dramatic plot line. So good, Misty. Keep up the good work.
Melissa
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Your writing is sooo good. You continue to keep this very interesting with high tension, good dialogue and a sensible and dramatic plot line. So good, Misty. Keep up the good work.
Melissa
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review and marvelous stars. I'm so glad you continue to enjoy it. Hopefully I can keep your interest to the end. Thank you again for all your help, support and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
PS. I'm glad to see you made it through that horrid storm. Hopefully you kept your electricity through it all. We lost ours once in an ice storm. Had to use the flashlight of this Bubba doll so I could see. My love for the toy grew so that it was history when it was over. It'd say all kinds of annoying things.
We're getting snow like they predicted and our temperature is a big 8. It's warmer in NY and Vermont. Think Old man winter is hitting the sauce again. Doing one final blast so we won't forget what bear he can be.
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Stay safe, my friend!!
Melisa
Comment from royowen
I'm sure Alejandro will come up with something from here, the kindly doctor is in their isn't there anyone who can stand up to that beast of a man, who's not really man, just a brute beast in the shell of a man. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Glaring at (Alhendro) Alejandro?
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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I'm sure Alejandro will come up with something from here, the kindly doctor is in their isn't there anyone who can stand up to that beast of a man, who's not really man, just a brute beast in the shell of a man. Beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Typo : Glaring at (Alhendro) Alejandro?
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your kind review and for catching my mistake. This is the second chapter I've had this problem I so wish I'd picked a simpler name.
Everyone is afraid of what'll happen if they push him too far. Don't worry his time is coming soon. Your right, he is a monster, like most in the trafficking game he sees them as moneymakers, not a human being.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
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Well done
Comment from Ulla
Hi Misty, this is heart breaking. There's no way she can lose her little baby. That would be too gruel. I hope, beyond hope, that they find a solution. It's well written.
Just one thing. You need to get the spelling of Alejandro right. You spell his name in all sorts of ways throughout the chapter.Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Hi Misty, this is heart breaking. There's no way she can lose her little baby. That would be too gruel. I hope, beyond hope, that they find a solution. It's well written.
Just one thing. You need to get the spelling of Alejandro right. You spell his name in all sorts of ways throughout the chapter.Ulla:)))
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for such a fantastic review and wonderful stars. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Anna and Alejandro are going to do all they can to keep their baby. This is the second chapter I've had this problem with. I do wish I'd picked something simpler, maybe I'll shorten his name to Al.
Thank you again for all your help, support, encouragement, and friendship. It always means the world to me, take care.
Comment from T.A. Walk
Really great descriptions of the parents interactions with the new baby! I can say as a parent, the first time sort of freaks you out! Are we doing it right, will I break it?? Well done, thank you for the read.
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Really great descriptions of the parents interactions with the new baby! I can say as a parent, the first time sort of freaks you out! Are we doing it right, will I break it?? Well done, thank you for the read.
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for reading my chapter. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I remember with my first I read all the baby books I could, did everything to get prepared was real confident about my abilities, then they hand me this tiny creature who's barely 5lb. and I think I'm not ready at all.
Thank you again for reading my chapter. Your support is always greatly appreciated, take care.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks how someone's secret revealed about earth-shattering discovery expressed through an investigative taletelling through organized plot development fostered through a few appropriate and realistic dialogues, ends with a quest; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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This Chapter of the Mystery and Crime Fiction speaks how someone's secret revealed about earth-shattering discovery expressed through an investigative taletelling through organized plot development fostered through a few appropriate and realistic dialogues, ends with a quest; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for such an encouraging review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter that you thought the plot an dialogue were realistic. Your support always means so muck to me, take care.
