Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson

Excellent

I like the words to your poem and the way you put it together using a mirror to express ones feeling. that was a splendid Idea
thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021

Thanks for your continued support, Cookie.
Joan

reply by Miss Cookie Atkinson on 17-Mar-2021

It is my pleasure.
take care
Cookie

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

That is really lovely, Joan. You have created the perfect words to go with that picture. So romantic, and loving, too. You have met the Lovers challenge well, my friend. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021

Thanks, for such positive remarks, Sandra.
Joan

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love it! What a great Valentine's Day tanka poem. The ideal love relationship is one where both values the other for being the complement, becoming whole together.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Glad you liked it, Helen. Thanks.
Joan

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I have enjoyed reading your interesting and unique poem. This looks like a haiku, but it might not be. Anyway, good work. I like it. Nice job. Thanks for sharing!

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Thank you. I am glad you liked it. I think it may be a tanka with rhyme

reply by Raul1 on 12-Feb-2021

You're welcome!