My Mirror
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Comment from LisaMay
Your poem is a lovely acknowledgment of complementary parts uniting romantically to complete each other. This is such a rare occurrence, to be highly valued.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Your poem is a lovely acknowledgment of complementary parts uniting romantically to complete each other. This is such a rare occurrence, to be highly valued.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Lisa,
Thanks for your kind words of encouragement.
Joan
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'My Mirror', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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'My Mirror', is short, succinct and delightfully descriptive. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
Comment Written 31-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thanks, Duchess, for your continuing support and encouragement. I appreciate the comments and all the stars.
Joan
Joan, as always you're more than welcome
Take care and stay stay.
the Duchess
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We all want a love like this, a faithful connection that lasts a lifetime to fill the void and make us whole, such loving and romantic words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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We all want a love like this, a faithful connection that lasts a lifetime to fill the void and make us whole, such loving and romantic words here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thanks, Dolly. Any one who finds it is lucky and should treasure it.
Joan
Comment from Janice Canerdy
In this ultra-concise poem, you have conveyed a powerful message about two who love each other and, just as importantly, complete each other,
creating a lovely picture.
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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In this ultra-concise poem, you have conveyed a powerful message about two who love each other and, just as importantly, complete each other,
creating a lovely picture.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 31-May-2022
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Thanks for the nice review and high rating, Janice.
Joan
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are clearly stated, intense, descriptive and
creative. I liked how the author used the image of a mirror to
state her feelings. The poem flows and connects well.
Hope you had a great weekend!....Maria
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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The author's words are clearly stated, intense, descriptive and
creative. I liked how the author used the image of a mirror to
state her feelings. The poem flows and connects well.
Hope you had a great weekend!....Maria
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks fine
Or your kind comments.
I have so far despite the weather.
Hope you did too
Joan
Comment from C2
This is a really solid poem. I like the image as much as the language you chose. The faces forming a ying-yang pattern like "the bottom of our souls." Thanks for sharing this! Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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This is a really solid poem. I like the image as much as the language you chose. The faces forming a ying-yang pattern like "the bottom of our souls." Thanks for sharing this! Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks, C2. I appreciate your comments.
Joan
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork to write about, Joan.
-You did a good job with your poem.
-I like the idea of the mirror representing
those qualities in each person.
-What isn't in one can be found in the other.
-The concluding lines show how
the relationship makes each half a whole.
-Well done.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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-Good artwork to write about, Joan.
-You did a good job with your poem.
-I like the idea of the mirror representing
those qualities in each person.
-What isn't in one can be found in the other.
-The concluding lines show how
the relationship makes each half a whole.
-Well done.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thank for the thorough review, Pam.
Joan
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You are welcome, Joan.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What a beautiful love poem. I had a boyfriend decades ago who used to tell me that I made him whole, so that line brought back memories.
You've done a wonderful job of matching picture to words to create a complete picture.
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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What a beautiful love poem. I had a boyfriend decades ago who used to tell me that I made him whole, so that line brought back memories.
You've done a wonderful job of matching picture to words to create a complete picture.
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Glad you thought the picture and words matched.
Thanks, Pam.
Joan
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your poem read well, DP. I liked the message
clearly conveyed in it. When two people in love
find each other as a soulmate, it strengthens the
love. Great job with the rhymes, the smooth flow,
and the message.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Your poem read well, DP. I liked the message
clearly conveyed in it. When two people in love
find each other as a soulmate, it strengthens the
love. Great job with the rhymes, the smooth flow,
and the message.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks for the continuing support and encouragement, Jan.
Joan
Comment from JoannaN
This poem has a song-like quality. It could be a subtitle for a picture, it could be a text for a postcard. Adele could sing something like this :)
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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This poem has a song-like quality. It could be a subtitle for a picture, it could be a text for a postcard. Adele could sing something like this :)
Comment Written 30-May-2022
reply by the author on 30-May-2022
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Thanks, Joanna. I am honored you think the words are something Adele would sing.
Joan
