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"The Book of Death"

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Is the living really alive and living?

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Comment from PENofFIRE
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Loved the read. I had to read it twice after I got to the last line, 'Satan.' That made this poem take a completely different outlook on what you wrote. Loved the surprise ending. Keep writing, you have success as a writer in your future.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    Thank you I like your name.
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Comment from moonsunrise
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This is a very powerful poem. The image you selected is very thought provoking. Our world's axis is ever changing. Satan is here to create evil, corruption and destruction. We must be on alert, pray and change the course with the Lord's help.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    Why thank you!
    And, you're the first person to catch this one.
    Note:
    As I was transferring it from The Notebook on to the cell phone.
    In order to send it out
    I had the idea in the middle.
    Why don't we make this a letter to to the site here?
    And sign it Satan!
    Doctor Ricky 1024.
    "Still Preaching the Choir Here at Fanstory"