haiku : sun simply shares
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Comment from Begin Again
As I strolled through your portfolio, I saw that you only needed one review for your ribbon - I feel you deserve it for this lovely poem. The chosen words will send many in search of the dictionary LOL, but it is beautiful. The chosen artwork was awesome and accented the poem. Though lately, I wish that sun would share it's rays a little more often. Smiles to you - Carol
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As I strolled through your portfolio, I saw that you only needed one review for your ribbon - I feel you deserve it for this lovely poem. The chosen words will send many in search of the dictionary LOL, but it is beautiful. The chosen artwork was awesome and accented the poem. Though lately, I wish that sun would share it's rays a little more often. Smiles to you - Carol
Comment Written 18-Mar-2021
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely Haiku and beautifully descriptive alliteration in each line. The sun as it comes and goes each day shares it's beauty with us and you've captured that well in these three lines. Lovely.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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A lovely Haiku and beautifully descriptive alliteration in each line. The sun as it comes and goes each day shares it's beauty with us and you've captured that well in these three lines. Lovely.
Comment Written 23-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2021
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I had a bit of fun with this one. G
Comment from dmt1967
This is a well written poem and I enjoyed reading it although, I couldn't pronounce half the words lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a well written poem and I enjoyed reading it although, I couldn't pronounce half the words lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Stay safe.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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They're a bit of a mouthful. lol Could you imagine if we actually spoke like this! lol
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a nicely written haiku. Your photo is absolutely breathtaking such vibrant hues. Very beautiful sunset. well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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This is a nicely written haiku. Your photo is absolutely breathtaking such vibrant hues. Very beautiful sunset. well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2021
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Many thanks. G
Comment from Ric Myworld
As I've said many times, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know sonnet from sorbet. But even with an old hack like me, sometimes the words and picture combination touch me in a special way. Thanks for sharing.
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As I've said many times, when it comes to poetry, I wouldn't know sonnet from sorbet. But even with an old hack like me, sometimes the words and picture combination touch me in a special way. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2021
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear giraffmang, It is not only the alliteration, But the use of such rich language, that makes this Haiku so special.
Because I have some room in this review, I wanted to know how your handle on FanStory came about, and if you would share your Real name, so that I may Have the person behind the handle, as a friend.
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Dear giraffmang, It is not only the alliteration, But the use of such rich language, that makes this Haiku so special.
Because I have some room in this review, I wanted to know how your handle on FanStory came about, and if you would share your Real name, so that I may Have the person behind the handle, as a friend.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from estory
Great job with the alliteration here in three distinctly different sound patterns' first all the s sounds, then the r sounds, and then the q sounds. It makes for a real interesting overall pattern, very different from traditional haiku and a step into the new and bold. estory
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Great job with the alliteration here in three distinctly different sound patterns' first all the s sounds, then the r sounds, and then the q sounds. It makes for a real interesting overall pattern, very different from traditional haiku and a step into the new and bold. estory
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from amada
This is a very well written haiku about the resplandecent rays of sun. Your lines lift my spirit; it is snowing in our town today. it's great to think of sun today. Best wishes in the contest.
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This is a very well written haiku about the resplandecent rays of sun. Your lines lift my spirit; it is snowing in our town today. it's great to think of sun today. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from aryr
Good luck in the haiku contest, G. It was a wonderful picture of the sun, which was rather majestic in appearance. Your words were simple yet distinctive in capturing the sun's essence. Very well done, and greatly enjoyed.
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Good luck in the haiku contest, G. It was a wonderful picture of the sun, which was rather majestic in appearance. Your words were simple yet distinctive in capturing the sun's essence. Very well done, and greatly enjoyed.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the picture it painted as I read. I also enjoyed the alliteration in each line. I am wondering if there's anything you can't write. I am jealous of your talent. Good luck with the contest.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. I like the picture it painted as I read. I also enjoyed the alliteration in each line. I am wondering if there's anything you can't write. I am jealous of your talent. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
