Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

A fun read and clever script. I wish there was more satirical writing on this web site. the mood in the current world and culture is way too somber. We need to break these chains of oppression.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2021

Thank you:)

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

Is this part of a script? I am not able to figure out the context. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the gentle rumour in digs. The characters are shaping well and the next episode may throw more light on the scene. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021

This is part of a book called kaleidoscope🤗

Comment from estory

Excellent

Your having fun writing this and we 're having fun reading it. Great counterpoint dialogue, I love how you have defined these two sides of yourself and they put each other down with real snappy one liners. estory

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Thank you so much:) for laughing with me.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

These past two days I've been getting an extra 2 hours of sleep due to the weather. It's even cold and icy in Texas. I can't believe it. I enjoyed reading your skit.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for reading it:) and having a laugh with me:)

Comment from Elizabeth Emerald

Excellent

Very funny--I love the part about parading in women's attire! Sugg: specify to givethe reader a vivid image.

Or IS IT your beauty sleep

You are right [COMMA] it's my beauty sleep. You know how grumpy I am if I WAKE before noon.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021

All done my friend :) thank you so much for waiting:)