Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello anonymous

Great entry for the
Lost - Flash Fiction writing prompt contest. Good word count. You managed to write a complete story in less than 500 words.

Angie assessed circles of hell. Seventh had a tub full of skin! Agghhh

Well done. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for the wonderful review

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Comment from Karen Estep

Excellent

I found this to be intriguing! Sometimes as a writer ideas flow from something we have read or wondered about. I find your piece to be very interesting especially the line, was hell just an upside down mirror of Heaven? Hell on earth. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for your review

Comment from equestrik

Excellent

This is an interesting write and creatively done. Your cartoon is unny and goes very well with your flash fiction story. All the best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for your review.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Who knows the answer to that question? This is quite a scary story. I don't fancy going in any of those circles, I think I'll leap-frog over them. :)) Well done, this is a unique flash-fiction story, and I wish you luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for your review and so sorry for my delay

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

You did a good job, Mystery Author, describing the nine circles of Hell--reminiscent of Dante's Inferno. Your descriptions of each circle was great and appropriate for those unfortunate to be lost in one. Hopefully, Angie will realize her error. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2021

thank you, Jan:)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

An interesting and different work, and it certainly reflects the theme of being lost. The descriptions of the circles reflect the theme of promise turned upside down, culminating with the final question.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for your wonderful review.

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

Now, I wonder what Angie might be thinking about
those nine circles which might represent heaven. Is
the best circle saved for the holy trinity? then the
disciples? etc... Good luck in the contest.

Rdfrdmom2

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Good idea, I should explore that:)

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

This story meets the requirements for the contest. It has a very good chance of winning the contest. It's beautifully written. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Thank you so much for your review and please forgive me for my delay

reply by Raul1 on 20-Aug-2023

You're welcome and you're forgiven!

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

A fascinating glimpse of the hereafter. What a shock it would be if humankind's weird beliefs turned out to have some substance, if our loved and lusts took on the awful garb of eternity. Be careful what you you wish for!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2023

Exactly, it's better to be ignorant.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

A nice read and I enjoyed the humor. Good luck in the contest.

notes:

but they forget {that} are not qualified because they are not pure enough!

- they

The eighth circle was a {shitty hole}.

- isn't the term: shit hole

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021