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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
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This is a nicely written tribute for Joan. I like this. I wonder what landscape your are painting ? what galaxy are you cruising? It's not the end my dear friend it's just the beginning. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, Joanne!
    Blessings on your week!
Comment from judiverse
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Great lines to introduce each stanza. You illustrate how much we can know about a person without actually having met him or her. You mention Italian cooking, her poems, her travels. Excellent conclusion, It's not the end, it's just the beginning. Lovely words of comfort in your poem. judi

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much, Judi. Hoping it will bring comfort to her husband and son. Hugs!
reply by judiverse on 14-Feb-2021
    You're welcome. I'm sure it will be a comfort to them. judi
Comment from amada
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I loved this tribute to JoanE, dear Helen. Your words, and well melodic lines seems to chant a chorus of words, hugs, and kisses. A living testament that the power of the words trespass limits of time and space. Well done.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much for your beautifully worded review, Nancy! Hugs!
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Lyenochka,

Wow! You've surely captured Joan's artistic and gracious spirit here in your well penned free verse tribute to a talented women so many of us miss.

I particularly liked the following lines:

"because you shared glimpses
of your soul
in well sculpted words"

I would like to make a contribution to the book you are sending to her husband.

AnnaLinda

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    Hi AnnaLinda,
    I'm so glad you reviewed this so that you can contribute to the book also. I will wait on sending it until your post is in.
    Blessings!
Comment from Raul1
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I find this poem really interesting to read. It sounds like you are written about someone you know or don't know yet. Excellent work! I like it. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    Thanks, Raul. I didn't really know her a long time - just in the last couple of years but because I knew her through her poems, I felt like I really did know her.
    Have a lovely weekend!
reply by Raul1 on 13-Feb-2021
    You're welcome!
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Helen, It is so like you, Someone who never knew Joan, to be the one to put this book together to send to her husband.
The verses that you have posted above, Are some of the finest that I have read, thank you for doing this, my most generous friend.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    Thank you, Suzanna. I got to know her in the last two years. I didn't know her as well as some others but going through the cancer journey with her, we did get correspond a little big outside of FS. She was very private so I feel privileged that she let me get to know her. So that's why I feel I should be the one to do the book. Hugs!
Comment from karenina
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So poignant. So quietly and sweetly offered. Your admiration for Joan and your faith that believes her spirit lives on is grace in poetry... A fine memorial for a very special woman. I wish I'd gotten to now her... perhaps on the other side?--Karenina

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    Yes, there is always the other side! We'll meet so many Fanstorians There! Thanks so much, Karenina.
    Hugs!
Comment from royowen
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I'll think of something else if you wish Helen, I have already written one, but there are more where that comes from, isn't it marvellous that there is a bottomless well to creativity? This is beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    You're so right, Roy! And your well of creativity is blessed and deep! So if something else came to mind, please share. I don't have a deadline but I thought I should do it soon.
    Hugs and blessings!
reply by royowen on 12-Feb-2021
    Well done.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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These are deeply emotional words here Helen, and I can tell that Joan had a great influence over you with her reviews and the poems she posted. Your words are touching, warm and gentle and a perfect tribute, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
    Thank you, Dolly! I was so hoping that she would recover. Hugs!
Comment from pome lover
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Helen, that is just beautiful! I'm afraid I don't know who died. But that is the most thoughtful thing for you to do for her husband. Am assuming she's a Fan Story member.
Your words show your fondness for her, even though, as you said, you'd never met in person, and you offer hopeful, peaceful consoling.
Really lovely.
Katharine

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
    Thank you, Katharine. Yes, you might have read some of her poems. She posted only once a week every Friday and she promoted very high so you couldn't miss it. But she was very private. Hugs!