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"The Book of Death"

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Is the living really alive and living?

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Comment from Shay Nekolle
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I enjoyed this poem. I really like the line "and keep my candle burning?" after bidding the farewell to your friends. It shows that it's important to keep memories of those long gone alive.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
    When I enjoy somebody's work I give them five or six dollars.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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This sounds like a final wish from a dying man to his friends and or family. I'm not sure if this is someone you know, or just a thought about what someone might think who is dying, but seems to look into a person's heart.

Thank you for sharing,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
    It's actually based on my pain from losing my 18-year-old son and then eight months later my wife.
    Thank you for your review Rhonda.
    Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 13-Feb-2021
    Hi Ricky, I do remember your story, and I know there's no real way to completely get over it. Thanks for sharing your feelings.