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Is the living really alive and living?
2 total reviews
Comment from
Shay Nekolle
I enjoyed this poem. I really like the line "and keep my candle burning?" after bidding the farewell to your friends. It shows that it's important to keep memories of those long gone alive.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
When I enjoy somebody's work I give them five or six dollars.
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Comment from
davisr (Rhonda)
This sounds like a final wish from a dying man to his friends and or family. I'm not sure if this is someone you know, or just a thought about what someone might think who is dying, but seems to look into a person's heart.
Thank you for sharing,
Rhonda
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
It's actually based on my pain from losing my 18-year-old son and then eight months later my wife.
Thank you for your review Rhonda.
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reply by davisr (Rhonda) on 13-Feb-2021
Hi Ricky, I do remember your story, and I know there's no real way to completely get over it. Thanks for sharing your feelings.
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