The Devil Calmly Waits
Demons on Display contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
No boy can get away from their sins.. People should believe there is justice in this world. Lies may cover the sins for a short time but eventually the truth will be know as this poem says; "a bitter truth that no lies can erase.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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No boy can get away from their sins.. People should believe there is justice in this world. Lies may cover the sins for a short time but eventually the truth will be know as this poem says; "a bitter truth that no lies can erase.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Good. Yes, one day there will be no more hiding anything. I really appreciate the generous stars. Have yourself a fantastic rest of your weekend.
Ron
Comment from LyndaS
Ahhhhh. Would that Satan be so beautifully poetic. HAHA! This entry really gets down to the hypocrisy of the cloak of salvation when used to hide what you really are. This is exquisitely dark and offers many truths about oh, so many lies. Your message flows with an awesome meter that you have mastered here and your presentation knocks this out of the park. I think this is clearly the best entry in this contest and you'll have my vote. Very well done. Lynda
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Ahhhhh. Would that Satan be so beautifully poetic. HAHA! This entry really gets down to the hypocrisy of the cloak of salvation when used to hide what you really are. This is exquisitely dark and offers many truths about oh, so many lies. Your message flows with an awesome meter that you have mastered here and your presentation knocks this out of the park. I think this is clearly the best entry in this contest and you'll have my vote. Very well done. Lynda
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the awesome review and huge sixer, Lynda. I dearly appreciate the kind comments and support. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. I hope you have a great night. Thank you again.
Comment from T.A. Walk
This poem is beautifully dark, and artfully crafted. My hat is off to you. The artwork is amazing as well. It's truly ridiculous the lengths at which we go to pretend we are good and perfect. When we can't accept our dark side, we cannot be honest with anyone else. Honestly, I can't find the right words. Outstanding piece.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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This poem is beautifully dark, and artfully crafted. My hat is off to you. The artwork is amazing as well. It's truly ridiculous the lengths at which we go to pretend we are good and perfect. When we can't accept our dark side, we cannot be honest with anyone else. Honestly, I can't find the right words. Outstanding piece.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the awesome review and the giant sixer, T.A.W. This is one of the few times that the artwork actually inspired the write. I went searching for a pic to use for the contest and when I came across this one, I just had to use it. Yes, it is quite ridiculous the length we go to sometimes. That's for sure. I really appreciate the generous rating, friend. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have yourself a great night and thank you again.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Wow, Mystery Writer I think you have a winner here. Your graphic presentation and the stanza you choose to represent your thoughts are sublime and the last stanza is closing the "deal." "So live within this unseen ruse
that I've instilled in you,
and know that I will never rest
until you've fallen too.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Wow, Mystery Writer I think you have a winner here. Your graphic presentation and the stanza you choose to represent your thoughts are sublime and the last stanza is closing the "deal." "So live within this unseen ruse
that I've instilled in you,
and know that I will never rest
until you've fallen too.
" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Iza. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have yourself a great night.