Heart Crafted Poems -2021
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your theme is well-expressed. I like the descriptive word choices. I could see everything as I read. Your formatting is wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Your theme is well-expressed. I like the descriptive word choices. I could see everything as I read. Your formatting is wonderful. Thanks for sharing.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the picture that you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last, your words are so true no matter how we feel about the snow. It has a purpose its helps to the land to give us a green lawn and beautiful flowers to bloom
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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I love the picture that you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last, your words are so true no matter how we feel about the snow. It has a purpose its helps to the land to give us a green lawn and beautiful flowers to bloom
This is what I call a food for thought poem
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Cookie, thank you!
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it was my pleasure
cookie
Comment from Julie Sandy
Very interesting I've never seen this type of poem before, It is very clever how the verses mirror each other.
I think its something I would like to try
lovely word, thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Very interesting I've never seen this type of poem before, It is very clever how the verses mirror each other.
I think its something I would like to try
lovely word, thanks for sharing
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Julie very good success with this if you so do choose to attempt same. I truly found the self imposed challenge with enjoyable and filed with many stops and starts to arrive at a truly readable finished product, please let me know if you do such.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I've never understood the point in this form, but you managed to cleverly arrange the words to also read backwards here, snow as quilting is a good metaphor, love Dolly x
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I've never understood the point in this form, but you managed to cleverly arrange the words to also read backwards here, snow as quilting is a good metaphor, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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Thank you Dolly.
Comment from amada
I enjoyed this palindrome style of poetry. For sure, it is different, and maybe enticing at the same time to read the same poem twice, and each time it has sort of a different tone.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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I enjoyed this palindrome style of poetry. For sure, it is different, and maybe enticing at the same time to read the same poem twice, and each time it has sort of a different tone.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2021
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amada thank you the task of doing this does present a self imposed challenge, that I found quite enjoyable to accomplish.
Comment from Susan Newell
Very nicely done. What a challenge to write a palindrome poem. I'm glad I stopped long enough to read it -- twice. I.e., from top to bottom and bottom to top. I guess it would be nearly impossible for punctuation and caps to match both ways.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Very nicely done. What a challenge to write a palindrome poem. I'm glad I stopped long enough to read it -- twice. I.e., from top to bottom and bottom to top. I guess it would be nearly impossible for punctuation and caps to match both ways.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Susan, yes I had a large amount of setups and starts to try to functional punctuation it the same. All for not. Thanks for the review.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Boogienights
This is very lovely. It's the circle of life and nature, like when we pass away into dust and once again become part of the earth. Very well written, I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.:)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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This is very lovely. It's the circle of life and nature, like when we pass away into dust and once again become part of the earth. Very well written, I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing.:)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much, I am very pleased you enjoyed this.
Comment from Susan Larson
I've seen palindromic sentences but this is first time I've ever seen a palindromic poem. What an accomplishment to make it all make sense and present such a vivid image.
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I've seen palindromic sentences but this is first time I've ever seen a palindromic poem. What an accomplishment to make it all make sense and present such a vivid image.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Susan thank you so much, It certainly did present me with some stops and starts, but I so enjoyed the self imposed challenge!
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Great poem. Wonderful use of words to form a beautiful poem and great picture. Snow covers all with no discrimination whatsoever. It is nature quilt. Great work.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Great poem. Wonderful use of words to form a beautiful poem and great picture. Snow covers all with no discrimination whatsoever. It is nature quilt. Great work.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Kitbok, thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my works.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
I like the poem starting with "snow" and ending the word with "snow". You must put a lot of efforts into this one. Certainly you deserve the credit.
You described very well how the winter can destroy all the leaves.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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I like the poem starting with "snow" and ending the word with "snow". You must put a lot of efforts into this one. Certainly you deserve the credit.
You described very well how the winter can destroy all the leaves.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you I enjoyed the process which does take one into a series of stops and starts to achieve the proper flow.