Comment from Goodadvicechan

Excellent

I like the picture and I like the title of "Strife."

The words of this poem are well chosen: "In a life, why do
we only call out to God in our time of strife?"

I totally agree with you that people should have faith.

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021

Thanks for reveiwing zanya

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The only answer this poem offers is that God has to be available for us to call upon him, when all else either has failed, or looks about to fail. It is a truism in one sense as, in a time of crisis such as war, the churches fill up. This current Coronavirus crisis might be considered as disproving this, but only because we are not permitted to gather together under one roof. You can bet there is some heavy praying going on these days, even among the non-praying classes.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021

Thanks for sharing these interesting observations zanya

Comment from Susan Newell

Good

I like the poem and the concept, but there is a major grammar error that alters its intended meaning. As read, it implies we should be calling out to others.

we call out to God only

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2021

Thanks for sharing zanya