A Simple Faith
Believing is easy when you see God's prints on you life.29 total reviews
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'A Simple Faith', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a privilege to both read and review a work of this standard. Beth, good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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'A Simple Faith', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a privilege to both read and review a work of this standard. Beth, good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and the lovely comments. I 'm glad you found it worthwhile.
Beth
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Beth,
You're very welcome.
God bless you stay safe! and take care
the Duchess
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a beautifully written poem that portrays a great faith in God. Very well written. How could I not have faith in Him? He's always by my side. I'll do my best to walk in step, and in His love abide. Beautiful photo selection to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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This is a beautifully written poem that portrays a great faith in God. Very well written. How could I not have faith in Him? He's always by my side. I'll do my best to walk in step, and in His love abide. Beautiful photo selection to go with your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you Joanne, I appreciate the review and lovely comments. I'm glad you liked it.
Beth
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your welcome
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely poem and it rhymes beautifully. Your deep faith shines through in this well written verse, your commitment to living life with the lord made clear. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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This is a lovely poem and it rhymes beautifully. Your deep faith shines through in this well written verse, your commitment to living life with the lord made clear. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and for the lovely comments. I'm glad you liked this.
Beth.
Comment from Sankey
AMEN Sis what a great testimony. I loved the artwork you chose as well.
What a surprise absolutely NO SPAGS! "Great is thy faithfulness Lord unto me!" Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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AMEN Sis what a great testimony. I loved the artwork you chose as well.
What a surprise absolutely NO SPAGS! "Great is thy faithfulness Lord unto me!" Well done!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for the review. I know God has been there for me so many times when I needed Him disparately.
Beth
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This a beautiful affirmation of your Faith. Having read your book so far, I would concur that He has been with you all the way. This presentation is a lovely contest entry. Good Luck, Beth.
Ralf
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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This a beautiful affirmation of your Faith. Having read your book so far, I would concur that He has been with you all the way. This presentation is a lovely contest entry. Good Luck, Beth.
Ralf
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you Ralf, I think writing my story has helped me remember times that God showed he cared for me in amazing ways.
Beth
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello Beth, you are very lucky - your faith is very strong and it is expressed beautifully in this poem. Written in good abcb rhyme scheme, maintained throughout and your rhythm is perfect. A good entry to the contest - very promising. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Hello Beth, you are very lucky - your faith is very strong and it is expressed beautifully in this poem. Written in good abcb rhyme scheme, maintained throughout and your rhythm is perfect. A good entry to the contest - very promising. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much Dorothy, I appreciate the review and the lovely comments. I feel I've been so blessed in so many ways. It is easy to have faith in such a God.
Beth
Comment from royowen
When I think of God's love for me, I always reflect on the love we have for our imperfect offspring, and we can love them with all their quirky ways, then God loves us in the same...but much more. Beautifully written Beth, a super effort with this deftly written ballad style Poem, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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When I think of God's love for me, I always reflect on the love we have for our imperfect offspring, and we can love them with all their quirky ways, then God loves us in the same...but much more. Beautifully written Beth, a super effort with this deftly written ballad style Poem, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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I very thankful that God still loves me in spite of the fact that I don't always live the way I should, but I know God must love me because I feel his presence. The story I'm writing reminds me a the many ways He seems to be there for me.
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You?re His child Beth, you still love your kids,
Comment from Lyn Peters
Lovely, simply lovely. Your poem is so honest and your faith so clear. I enjoy your biographical work very much, now I've had an opportunity to enjoy your poetry. You are a well rounded writer. Thank you for sharing your work with your readers.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Lovely, simply lovely. Your poem is so honest and your faith so clear. I enjoy your biographical work very much, now I've had an opportunity to enjoy your poetry. You are a well rounded writer. Thank you for sharing your work with your readers.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much. I really appreciate you reading my writing. I'm glad you liked this.
Beth
Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante
That's lovely imagery, seeing God's prints on your life, and as I've read your story going back for many years, I couldn't agree more. He has kept you and your family safe, and in good hands, in many situations, and guided you on the right path. This is a beautiful poem about His very personal touch on your life.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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That's lovely imagery, seeing God's prints on your life, and as I've read your story going back for many years, I couldn't agree more. He has kept you and your family safe, and in good hands, in many situations, and guided you on the right path. This is a beautiful poem about His very personal touch on your life.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm glad you like it. Looking back over my life I see many things I'm almost forgotten that shows God's intervention.
Beth
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You're welcome, Beth.
It's so good to do that!
"I will give thanks to you, Lord, with all my heart; I will tell of all your wonderful deeds."
Psalms 9:1 NIV
And the Bible extols the virtues of doing that, in many other places.
Love, Mary Kay xoxo
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Awww, that is the sweetest poem ever. I can feel your emotions and faith through your sincere words.
but unseen hands have picked me up
and steadied feet of clay. - brilliantly put, my friend!
Love that whole second stanza.
Well done, and good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Awww, that is the sweetest poem ever. I can feel your emotions and faith through your sincere words.
but unseen hands have picked me up
and steadied feet of clay. - brilliantly put, my friend!
Love that whole second stanza.
Well done, and good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Thank you Rhonda, I appreciate the review and lovely comment. Thanks for telling me your favorite part.
Beth
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You are quite welcome. It was a lovely and inspiring poem!
