Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

This is the best Demon Poetry contest entry I have read today. It rhymes, makes sense, and was entertaining. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest. Stay safe and healthy.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thank you for this wonderful review. I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from Hannah Baller

Excellent

This is a nice piece of work and really shows a story that could be turned into something more, extended into a book? Very cool and I look forward to seeing more

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thank you for such a great review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

This is a incredibly well constructed and dark piece which packs a solid punch. It reminds me of Orpheus descending into hell to capture the lost Eurydice.

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 Comment Written 09-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thank you for taking time to read my poem and for this nice review. :)