If Only (a winter sonnet)
Winter Sonnet contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
Yeah, winter can be such a turn-on for sensitive tissue. Loved your sonnet; I feel it rightfully deserves to win so will add my vote in the forthcoming booth.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Yeah, winter can be such a turn-on for sensitive tissue. Loved your sonnet; I feel it rightfully deserves to win so will add my vote in the forthcoming booth.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
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Lol. Sensitive tissue. Haha. Thank you for the great review and support, Lisa. From the number of overwhelming reviews (2 before yours) I figured most people weren't appreciating all the work that actually went into this, plus didn't like the bit of ridiculous humor added in there at the end. But when offering a whole 2 cents, I didn't really plan on too many reviews. Lol. Thank you again, Lisa. Made my day.
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I appreciated the work and the nipple giggle. I am used to poverty so 2 cents makes me feel rich.
Comment from Pantygynt
This flows nicely in the Shakespearean style. Your iambic pentameter is sound provided you 'admiring' as four syllables. I never resort to the dictionaries over syllables as they are units of sound dependent on individual's pronunciation and I would say it has four pronounced syllables, ad-my-er-ing. Tom there are two distinct vowel sounds in that 'mire'.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This flows nicely in the Shakespearean style. Your iambic pentameter is sound provided you 'admiring' as four syllables. I never resort to the dictionaries over syllables as they are units of sound dependent on individual's pronunciation and I would say it has four pronounced syllables, ad-my-er-ing. Tom there are two distinct vowel sounds in that 'mire'.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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I never really even thought about that. I guess some could say it's only 3. I've always said and read it as 4 myself. Thank you for the great review and stars, Pantygynt.
Comment from greyson ernst
this is really really impressive i love this so very much you won my vote by a long shot so far and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good day
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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this is really really impressive i love this so very much you won my vote by a long shot so far and as always keep writing and stay safe have a good day
Comment Written 09-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the great review, Greyson. I really appreciate the generous stars and support, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece, even with the silly ending. Lol. Have a good one.