Comment from Alba31

Excellent

Really loved that you decided on joy as the emotion you'd describe. This poem is so lively and fun to read, you sound like a bubbly and optimistic person who is fun to have around.
Thanks for sharing :)

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

You're welcome, my friend! :)

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Dear Mystery Writer,

Well, I gotta tell ya. I actually fear for your bodily safety, my friend. All that jumping up and down and driving crazy does not sound very smart. Please calm down. There's got to be better ways to express your joy. *smile*

Thanks!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks! I don't do those crazy things. I'm happy you enjoyed it! This is a contest entry only.

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Lol, I like this free verse. You are either very happy or very insane.

I keep zig-zagging through
highways,
they keep honking horns, - you're trying to die happy


it feels like I'm just being born. - Pretty sure that was painful for both parties.

Great entry. Keep smiling.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thanks!