Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

A fun twist on an 'almost Tyburn' offering here -- quite unique!! ;) :) Such a creative offering for this limited length contest -- thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021

Thank you for your complementary comments. It's appreciated much. Hugs.

Comment from donette1914

Excellent

very romantic in such a few words that you made come to life
simply outstanding in just a few words
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing writer and you really make ones think and believable poem
I hope for the best in the contest

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thank you so much for your kind and complementary review. I humbly appreciate it. Hugs.

Comment from T.A. Walk

Excellent

I have to say I am intrigued by this poem. I would never have considered using a single word as a line. Honestly, I didn't like it at first, but I read it a few times. It was actually well done and delivers the message quite clearly. Lust is a powerful intoxication. Good luck!

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021

Thank you. I appreciate your supportive and encouraging comments. Hugs.

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021

Thank you. I appreciate your supportive and encouraging comments. Hugs.