Together
A love quip.16 total reviews
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hello Sal.
This is an interesting take on a six line poem. The message is very clear and is amplified by the coppertone picture you included.
(*z*) PAL
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Hello Sal.
This is an interesting take on a six line poem. The message is very clear and is amplified by the coppertone picture you included.
(*z*) PAL
Comment Written 10-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review and kind comments. My husband and me in a few years. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs....
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Hi Sal.
You're welcome.
(*z*) PAL
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-line poem, Together, has the required lines and leaves the speaker as the S. When there's no I in team and no U in us, the rest of the vowels need security.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This six-line poem, Together, has the required lines and leaves the speaker as the S. When there's no I in team and no U in us, the rest of the vowels need security.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you, Bill!
Comment from Gert sherwood
Huge smiles to you Sally Law
Your photo of the elderly couple is perfect and your love quip. brought tears to my eyes; when I saw in the photo of the elderly walking
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Huge smiles to you Sally Law
Your photo of the elderly couple is perfect and your love quip. brought tears to my eyes; when I saw in the photo of the elderly walking
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
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You are most welcome Oh didn't know your writing was a Blind Contest Entry
Now shall I edit my review?
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image and
nice presentation.
-You have used your
opening words well
to show your feelings,
and conclude with why
you feel that way.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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-Good image and
nice presentation.
-You have used your
opening words well
to show your feelings,
and conclude with why
you feel that way.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Patty Palmer
That sounds like you must have had a wonderful life together. Those words tell so much. I love the picture! It enhances the poem very much. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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That sounds like you must have had a wonderful life together. Those words tell so much. I love the picture! It enhances the poem very much. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, for such a 'short' form, this is such a breathtaking and heart-felt offering! Should do well in the contest -- well done! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Oh, for such a 'short' form, this is such a breathtaking and heart-felt offering! Should do well in the contest -- well done! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much! :))
Comment from ESOSTINE
I love the creativity in the poem. Simple words with depth of emotional touch. Thanks for letting us into your world, and may you find the consolation you deserve. Lol!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I love the creativity in the poem. Simple words with depth of emotional touch. Thanks for letting us into your world, and may you find the consolation you deserve. Lol!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the lovely review!
Comment from royowen
I like this rather clever six line poem, the theme is very poignant and sad, which seems to be the same song I've been hearing for awhile now, partners who've departed. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I like this rather clever six line poem, the theme is very poignant and sad, which seems to be the same song I've been hearing for awhile now, partners who've departed. Beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much!
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Bless you
Comment from MissMerri
This is such a clever and unique six-line poem. I liked the "hidden" meaning of the "you" but wondered if it should be spelled "U"... but then perhaps that would be too obscure. This is just a darn cute and appealing poem with a touch of sadness in its meaning. I wish you much luck in this contest. MM
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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This is such a clever and unique six-line poem. I liked the "hidden" meaning of the "you" but wondered if it should be spelled "U"... but then perhaps that would be too obscure. This is just a darn cute and appealing poem with a touch of sadness in its meaning. I wish you much luck in this contest. MM
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you very much!
Comment from kmoss
The contest is for a six LINE poem. I'm pretty sure that you can expand on this idea though. It s a good thought. Good luck in extending it to meet the requirements.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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The contest is for a six LINE poem. I'm pretty sure that you can expand on this idea though. It s a good thought. Good luck in extending it to meet the requirements.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Repaired it. Thanks.
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I like it! I updated my rating.
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Thank you so very much!
