Visual Vibes
Sending you sweet warmth in the cold...17 total reviews
Comment from Julie Sandy
lovely entry for the 5-7-5 competition, good just of words.
It's very strange to see daffodils covered in snow, I like the line 'powdered sugar smiles', although I don't think the daffodils would like the snow one bit lol.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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lovely entry for the 5-7-5 competition, good just of words.
It's very strange to see daffodils covered in snow, I like the line 'powdered sugar smiles', although I don't think the daffodils would like the snow one bit lol.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your presentation works well--the color scene, the bright, cheery flower, the descriptive word choices, and the rhyme as an added bonus. Good job with the style of the 575.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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This is a great contest entry, Mystery Author. Your presentation works well--the color scene, the bright, cheery flower, the descriptive word choices, and the rhyme as an added bonus. Good job with the style of the 575.
Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Anne Johnston
You have chosen some very effective words to describe the picture. I like "snowdust", "powdered sugar smiles." How brave these flowers are to smile when they are coated with snow. I hope you do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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You have chosen some very effective words to describe the picture. I like "snowdust", "powdered sugar smiles." How brave these flowers are to smile when they are coated with snow. I hope you do well in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!!
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You are welcome
Comment from Sally Law
Beautifully penned 575 poem for your offering today. It doesn't seem right that such beauty should be covered in snow. But it happens.
Sending you my very best today for the contest,
Sally XOs..
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Beautifully penned 575 poem for your offering today. It doesn't seem right that such beauty should be covered in snow. But it happens.
Sending you my very best today for the contest,
Sally XOs..
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from oliver818
This is a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it. What particularly stood out for me was the evocative imagery you used which brought the piece to life. I particularly enjoyed the last lines. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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This is a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading it. What particularly stood out for me was the evocative imagery you used which brought the piece to life. I particularly enjoyed the last lines. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
These are my favorite flowers and your line, "powdered sugar smiles" makes me understand why they leave such a sweet glow longer after we have looked at them.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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These are my favorite flowers and your line, "powdered sugar smiles" makes me understand why they leave such a sweet glow longer after we have looked at them.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
Comment from donette1914
you painted a pictures with your beautiful words
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing writer and you really make ones think and believable poem
I hope for the best in the contest
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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you painted a pictures with your beautiful words
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing writer and you really make ones think and believable poem
I hope for the best in the contest
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!!
