Visual Vibes
Sending you sweet warmth in the cold...17 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
What an outstanding poem about the changes of the seasons. The artwork is a great complement to your verse. The overall presentation, with the coloring, adds to my enjoyment.
Mark
P.S. Looking forward to the daffodils in my yard.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Yvette,
What an outstanding poem about the changes of the seasons. The artwork is a great complement to your verse. The overall presentation, with the coloring, adds to my enjoyment.
Mark
P.S. Looking forward to the daffodils in my yard.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thanx so much, Mark -- I'm finally finding 'me' again and it feels good to be back!! Look forward to re-connecting! Blessings from Middle Alabama, my friend!! ;-)
Comment from Carlos' girl
Hello ym i Stopped by to read some good poetry and i just love this sweet neat poem. It makes ME smile. Really powdery sugary picture perfect. . . nice work and the ending sums it up
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Hello ym i Stopped by to read some good poetry and i just love this sweet neat poem. It makes ME smile. Really powdery sugary picture perfect. . . nice work and the ending sums it up
Comment Written 11-Jul-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thanx so much, lovely lady!! I'm finally finding 'me' again and it feels good to be back!! Look forward to re-connecting! Blessings from Middle Alabama, my friend!! ;-)
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You are a blessing
Judith
Comment from thoughtgame2
So much said with so little words . Thank you . I always enjoy reading your work. And the picture was spot on as usual. I hope to be able to fine tune my writings as well as those I read here on fan story. Yours being one of my fondest. Thanks again and keep them coming.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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So much said with so little words . Thank you . I always enjoy reading your work. And the picture was spot on as usual. I hope to be able to fine tune my writings as well as those I read here on fan story. Yours being one of my fondest. Thanks again and keep them coming.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2021
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2021
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Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is a beautiful picture. The powdered daffodils sound out of place but eerily lovely in their own way.
I have heard about the deep freeze in the southern states and have worried about you and all the rest who live down there. How are you doing? I haven't seen your posts since early this month and that is so not like you.
Take care and stay warm, my friend!
Jesse
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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This is a beautiful picture. The powdered daffodils sound out of place but eerily lovely in their own way.
I have heard about the deep freeze in the southern states and have worried about you and all the rest who live down there. How are you doing? I haven't seen your posts since early this month and that is so not like you.
Take care and stay warm, my friend!
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thanx so much, Jesse -- have missed you!! I'm finally finding 'me' again and it feels good to be back!! Hope you're still out there!! Look forward to re-connecting! Blessings from Middle Alabama, sir! ;-)
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Hello Yvette!
I haven't heard from you in a long time!
Welcome back! I hope you are doing alright.
Keep it real!
Jesse
Comment from w.j.debi
I love the visual image you create with that final line
powdered sugar smiles.
Snow dust is an excellent word. I've never heard it before so I'm guessing it is one you have coined.
Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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I love the visual image you create with that final line
powdered sugar smiles.
Snow dust is an excellent word. I've never heard it before so I'm guessing it is one you have coined.
Well done. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2024
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Thanx for the review, my lady!! Good to see the beautiful unicorn again! Hope you're still out there! Blessings from Middle Alabama!! :-)
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It?s so good to see your name on my box. I?ve been hit and miss this last few months. I?m caretaker for my mother now and so my posting depends on how she?s doing. I do try to drop in every week or so to review. I am hoping to read more of the fantasy novel you were writing. I have wondered how that fairy and werewolf were getting along. Sounds like you?re busy so I?ll be patient. Hurrah, you are back! I am delighted!
Comment from Bill Schott
This winter 5-7-5, Visual Vibes, has the right set up and finds the hints of snow framing the signs of spring which will begin the battle to be.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This winter 5-7-5, Visual Vibes, has the right set up and finds the hints of snow framing the signs of spring which will begin the battle to be.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Mia Twysted
The image helps with this piece. It does look like powdered sugar on some sort of cookie. I needed the picture to help me see this one as without it it was left a little fuzzy on what was being projected.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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The image helps with this piece. It does look like powdered sugar on some sort of cookie. I needed the picture to help me see this one as without it it was left a little fuzzy on what was being projected.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 winter writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too.
I like the topic of daffodils...your poem is my favorite in the contest.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Nice entry for the 5-7-5 winter writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too.
I like the topic of daffodils...your poem is my favorite in the contest.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a very nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Touches of snow dust accent fragile daffodils. Powdered sugar smiles. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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This is a very nicely written 5-7-5 poem. Touches of snow dust accent fragile daffodils. Powdered sugar smiles. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from moonsunrise
I just love reading your poems. You have a beautiful way of expressing words that even if you did not have an image the reader could visualize it.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I just love reading your poems. You have a beautiful way of expressing words that even if you did not have an image the reader could visualize it.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much!
