The Signs Are Clear
Things may never be the same again.9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This six-line poem, The Signs Are Clear, has the required lines and seems to show the signs of a weakening resolve to press on with loss being too great.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This six-line poem, The Signs Are Clear, has the required lines and seems to show the signs of a weakening resolve to press on with loss being too great.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thanks, dear Bill for reading and dropping a review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
Six Line Poem writing prompt contest. Good six lines form.
We live through difficult times with our relationships. Hope helps a lot.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the
Six Line Poem writing prompt contest. Good six lines form.
We live through difficult times with our relationships. Hope helps a lot.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much, dear Gypsy for your review and kind comments. Lol!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow, a very emotional offering here with the edges of broken heart still very jagged indeed... Although there is a mixture of rhyme and not, it is still a very intriguing offering... thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Wow, a very emotional offering here with the edges of broken heart still very jagged indeed... Although there is a mixture of rhyme and not, it is still a very intriguing offering... thanx so much for sharing and best of luck to you at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and kind comments. Lol!
Comment from Eternal Muse
A nice optimistic poem showing a person's realization that there is no more need to despair over the loss of someone; determination to break free from emotional chains, the challenge to replace grief with smiles and hope.
Very well written, good imagery and visuals - you brought out well that there IS hope for those who are emotionally struck by failed relationships - challenge is to engage your will power and strength.
Nicely written - good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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A nice optimistic poem showing a person's realization that there is no more need to despair over the loss of someone; determination to break free from emotional chains, the challenge to replace grief with smiles and hope.
Very well written, good imagery and visuals - you brought out well that there IS hope for those who are emotionally struck by failed relationships - challenge is to engage your will power and strength.
Nicely written - good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much for the great review and motivating comments. Lol!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Your poem cries sadness, discretion, and desperation. Now we look through the window and wait for better days of freedom. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and with the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Your poem cries sadness, discretion, and desperation. Now we look through the window and wait for better days of freedom. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and with the contest.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much Iza for the great review. Lol!
Comment from JessyCee
I do like this, however the first line throws me off a bit, doesn't flow as nicely as the rest to me. I feel like it could use some changes in vocabulary used. Otherwise, bravo.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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I do like this, however the first line throws me off a bit, doesn't flow as nicely as the rest to me. I feel like it could use some changes in vocabulary used. Otherwise, bravo.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much for reading and providing a great review. Your feedback is well taken and appreciated.
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I just made some rearrangement of line 1 as suggested. Could you please take a look? Thanks
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Hi there,
I think that flows much better! :)
Comment from donette1914
very heartfelt and emotional on hope
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing writer and you really make ones think and believable poem
I hope for the best in the contest
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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very heartfelt and emotional on hope
very interesting piece with a wonderful photo to go with your work
your words are so smooth and very well chosen words to make this come to life
your an amazing writer and you really make ones think and believable poem
I hope for the best in the contest
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2021
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Thanks so much for the great review. Well appreciated. Lol!
Comment from CA Keller
Such a sad poem...but as the image shows, still hopeful in nature. If this about you, all the best to you in your life pursuits. This poem will resonate with many after this last year, so many revelations is so many relationships. The best of luck to you in this contest!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Such a sad poem...but as the image shows, still hopeful in nature. If this about you, all the best to you in your life pursuits. This poem will resonate with many after this last year, so many revelations is so many relationships. The best of luck to you in this contest!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thanks you so much dear Cynthia for the review and good wishes. Lol!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This is a clear and simple approach which works because it hinges on the question of when we give up hope. There is a resignation that is sad but so relatable to how we feel when all seems dark.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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This is a clear and simple approach which works because it hinges on the question of when we give up hope. There is a resignation that is sad but so relatable to how we feel when all seems dark.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2021
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Thanks for your kind review. I value your time and feedback. Lol!
