Comment from QC Poet

Excellent

Hello Mr. Loria, Blessings to you and your Family. That last line is a belly buster for me. Beautifully written rhyming I hope entry. Best of Luck in the Contest. Blessings.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

I like that last line too. Thank you for your review.

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

this is really good i love the picture just one suggestion its not a big one though i would change life to something else so you dont have same worn repeating itself but besides that this is really good

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks for your suggestion. Thank you for your review.

Comment from nova2

Excellent

i love this cute little romantic poem. it is so cute, yet so simple in its own way. it really shows how well of a writer you are by really giving a description of the things you want in your future! thank you for making this!

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thank you for your review.

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

That last line did it for me. What. A hopeful, whimsical and transparent piece. I love the wonder of romance and how open hearted this piece remains from start to finish. Lovely.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2021

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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021

Thanks so much for your comments and review.