It's My Fault, Please Forgive Me
Contest Entry7 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Raul, what a sweet poem ...my sweet friend...
there's something humbling about a man who will
say he is sorry...and our love will start again...
I love your poem you...and love the picture...
so very nicely written...and good luck in the contest...
love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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HI Raul, what a sweet poem ...my sweet friend...
there's something humbling about a man who will
say he is sorry...and our love will start again...
I love your poem you...and love the picture...
so very nicely written...and good luck in the contest...
love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
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your so welcome my friend...love xxoo
Comment from webfoot
oh wow, Raul. Your lady is so lucky to have you. It's heartwarming to have someone say "please forgive me"
good stuff, Raul and good luck with your lady :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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oh wow, Raul. Your lady is so lucky to have you. It's heartwarming to have someone say "please forgive me"
good stuff, Raul and good luck with your lady :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thanks! I don't have a girlfriend, not yet. I'm happy you enjoyed it!
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well, you are going in the right direction :)
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Excellent choice of words for both the picture and the poem.
Ego in life worths nothing, forgive a little worths much more.
"My lady, it's my fault, I hope you can forgive me, and our love will still again be."
What a beautiful poem.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Excellent choice of words for both the picture and the poem.
Ego in life worths nothing, forgive a little worths much more.
"My lady, it's my fault, I hope you can forgive me, and our love will still again be."
What a beautiful poem.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a sweet poem. Also that it is the way you word it by opening with My lady, I see it as first not as being possessive but as an address of respect. Your next line is admitting a wrong that sounds sincere.
Very well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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This is a sweet poem. Also that it is the way you word it by opening with My lady, I see it as first not as being possessive but as an address of respect. Your next line is admitting a wrong that sounds sincere.
Very well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thanks! Thank you for the good luck. Much appreciated!
Comment from Teri7
This is a very sweet and very well worded and written short poem you have penned for the rhyming i hope poetry contest. You used great heartfelt words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. teri
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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This is a very sweet and very well worded and written short poem you have penned for the rhyming i hope poetry contest. You used great heartfelt words and very lovely imagery. Best wishes in the contest. teri
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from nomi338
Not bad. A man who knows how to beg and is not ashamed to do it, will have and know love a lot longer than the stiff necked, full of pride guys who don't have the sense to know that the time will come when you must humble yourself and say I am deeply sorry and resume their happy life.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Not bad. A man who knows how to beg and is not ashamed to do it, will have and know love a lot longer than the stiff necked, full of pride guys who don't have the sense to know that the time will come when you must humble yourself and say I am deeply sorry and resume their happy life.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from nomi338
Not bad. A man who knows how to beg and is not ashamed to do it, will have and know love a lot longer than the stiff necked, full of pride guys who don't have the sense to know that the time will come when you must humble yourself and say I am deeply sorry and resume their happy life.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Not bad. A man who knows how to beg and is not ashamed to do it, will have and know love a lot longer than the stiff necked, full of pride guys who don't have the sense to know that the time will come when you must humble yourself and say I am deeply sorry and resume their happy life.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thanks!