John Lennon
A true Beatle in every way.28 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Such a pity he was killed so young, who knows what creative gems he might have unleashed unto the world, this is an excellent post, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Such a pity he was killed so young, who knows what creative gems he might have unleashed unto the world, this is an excellent post, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Most welcome
Comment from Barrie Godwin
Great play on words and the opening lines drives to a rhythm if one respects the punctuation you added. It is a sad subject but that does no detract from the fact that it meets, very nicely, the criteria. Good luck
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Great play on words and the opening lines drives to a rhythm if one respects the punctuation you added. It is a sad subject but that does no detract from the fact that it meets, very nicely, the criteria. Good luck
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, John Lennon, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of the Fab Four's most talented and memorable member. Imagine.
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This 5-7-5, John Lennon, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers of the Fab Four's most talented and memorable member. Imagine.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, quite ironic, which you have captured in your short poem. It is well written, and an excellent supporting photo. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Yes, quite ironic, which you have captured in your short poem. It is well written, and an excellent supporting photo. Best wishes for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
You really said it all in just a few words. His life was inspiring to many. My brother, whose birthday is today, really loved him. My brother had the song "Blackbird" played at his funeral when he died at the age of 56.
Thank you for sharing! My brother was a good memory.
Susan
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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You really said it all in just a few words. His life was inspiring to many. My brother, whose birthday is today, really loved him. My brother had the song "Blackbird" played at his funeral when he died at the age of 56.
Thank you for sharing! My brother was a good memory.
Susan
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thanks! My condolences to your family and friends. He sounds like a good person. Thanks for sharing your story. Keep writing!
Comment from equestrik
Well written poem for the 5-7-5 contest. The picture you chose to accompany your writing is paired well with it. His death was such a tragic loss. All the best to you in the upcoming contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Well written poem for the 5-7-5 contest. The picture you chose to accompany your writing is paired well with it. His death was such a tragic loss. All the best to you in the upcoming contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
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Thanks!
Comment from lyenochka
Was this an anniversary of Lennon's death? He was "instrumental" to the success of the Beatles (nice word play). It's so sad that he had to die under such violent circumstances. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Was this an anniversary of Lennon's death? He was "instrumental" to the success of the Beatles (nice word play). It's so sad that he had to die under such violent circumstances. Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment from Mia Twysted
This piece is a nice tribute to a man who influenced so many people over the course of his life. The reader is left saddened at the end knowing a good life ended long before it should have.
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This piece is a nice tribute to a man who influenced so many people over the course of his life. The reader is left saddened at the end knowing a good life ended long before it should have.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Boogienights
An interesting choice for the contest. You must be a Beatles fan, as am I, though I liked Paul Mccarthy the best. They were all so talented, their music lives on. Best of luck in the contest. :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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An interesting choice for the contest. You must be a Beatles fan, as am I, though I liked Paul Mccarthy the best. They were all so talented, their music lives on. Best of luck in the contest. :)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Beautifully written 5-7-5 poem. Instrumental to success, killed by obsessed fan. Nice photo to go with your words remembering John Lennon. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a Beautifully written 5-7-5 poem. Instrumental to success, killed by obsessed fan. Nice photo to go with your words remembering John Lennon. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
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