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Innocence

Sadly it won't be forever

6 total reviews 
Comment from Brigitte Elko
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What a beautiful child pictured here. Yes, time wipes innocence away but it is in our power to teach hope, strength, and free will for a child to grow up complete. Well done.
Blessings,
brigitte

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much Brigitte
Comment from Paul Borders
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You're killin' me. I'm the unemotional type but still human. I instantly recalled a memory of this event of innocent eyes looking up at me. Nothing melts a heart faster. This contest has three good submissions. I'm casting my vote for your entry.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
    Thank you so much Paul.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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This poem is really well written and shows respect for children; love the image of the little girl. Innocence does show in the eyes of children that we love. When they are born, they are innocent.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
    Thanks Rosemary
Comment from Jean Lutz1
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I don't think even four years ago did I know what human trafficking is. Then a shelter, Lynhaven Retreat in Hammond, La. opened four miles from me. It is a home for women from several nations who were sold as slaves, often as a child. Life changed for me -- I am not an activist against this evil.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
    Thanks for reviewing
Comment from Anne Johnston
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Beautiful picture and great words to describe. When we look into the eyes of a child, we see innocence and trust. How easily those things are destroyed if we are not careful.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
    Thanks Anne
reply by Anne Johnston on 03-Feb-2021
    You are very welcome
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
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Such a cute picture! And your poem is perfect. The trust a child places in an adult is all-encompassing when they are young, and God will deal with anyone who endangers that beautiful trust.
Thank you for sharing,
Susan

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
    Thank you Susan. God bless.