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Viewing comments for Chapter 75 "Philly's Fun Fades"Chochee Medina Life and Times
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We can't change the fact that winter has to run its course, even if we pray for an early spring, winter has a habit of lingering on, this is a fun post, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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We can't change the fact that winter has to run its course, even if we pray for an early spring, winter has a habit of lingering on, this is a fun post, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
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Thank you Ms. Dolly for Your Review, Reading, and Rating this poem offering and your Valued Support. Bless you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Philly's Fun Fades', is a well-written and entertaining piece. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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'Philly's Fun Fades', is a well-written and entertaining piece. Good luck with the contest! My fingers are crossed for you. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you for Your Time, to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering. Most of my offering seem to be a disqualifying favorite. Thanks again.
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QC Poet,
You're very welcome.
God bless stay safe! and have a great week end,
the Duchess
Comment from Boogienights
Does it ever turn out that we won't have six more weeks of winter? That groundhog has to go, he never predicts early spring. I really enjoyed this contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Does it ever turn out that we won't have six more weeks of winter? That groundhog has to go, he never predicts early spring. I really enjoyed this contest entry, best of luck to you. :)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering. I agree guess better safe than sorry in the prediction
Comment from Taurus the Elder
Very good. Good original use of seventeen syllables. Contemporary subject, easy read, supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Very good. Good original use of seventeen syllables. Contemporary subject, easy read, supported well by the art work. Great job, good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Interesting idea: No Phil Never Trick! - because false Pick, - and Windy Rid Shtick. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Interesting idea: No Phil Never Trick! - because false Pick, - and Windy Rid Shtick. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Bless you and Thank for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering.
Comment from Sharon Nolen
Interesting poem. You definitely nail it. It meets the requirements for a 5-7-5 poem. Now, because I am a novice, I really had no idea what you were talking about. But I learned a new word: Shtick. I have never heard of that before so I looked it up. Very clever use of it. I love learning new things.
Good job!!!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Interesting poem. You definitely nail it. It meets the requirements for a 5-7-5 poem. Now, because I am a novice, I really had no idea what you were talking about. But I learned a new word: Shtick. I have never heard of that before so I looked it up. Very clever use of it. I love learning new things.
Good job!!!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks for Reading, Rating, and Reviewing this poem offering. Blessings to you.
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You're welcome and blessings to you, too.
Comment from Old Soldier
Can't remember the last time I saw my shadow. Maybe I am a vampire? I just know it's there. Thanks for the fun poem. Good luck and keep reading writing and reviewing.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Can't remember the last time I saw my shadow. Maybe I am a vampire? I just know it's there. Thanks for the fun poem. Good luck and keep reading writing and reviewing.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thanks for Reading, Rating and Reviewing this poem offering. Bless you.
Comment from Jean Lutz1
Some of us are on to the fakes. Whether a city or a horse -- some of us are old enough to remember when they were true blues, not pumped on steroids. I saw my shadow yesterday and went back to bed also. Best wishes with your entry.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Some of us are on to the fakes. Whether a city or a horse -- some of us are old enough to remember when they were true blues, not pumped on steroids. I saw my shadow yesterday and went back to bed also. Best wishes with your entry.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you for your Support, Reviews, Ratings and Comment
Comment from royowen
What an excellent new language, it makes pigeon English look a little unprofessional, but I like it and I'm sure the judges will too, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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What an excellent new language, it makes pigeon English look a little unprofessional, but I like it and I'm sure the judges will too, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Mr. Owen, Bless you and Thank you for your Continued Support, Reviews, Ratings and Valued Advise. I did bring that old famous bit back LOL
One rater said they never heard the word.
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Bless you