Morning's Fresh Perspective
Accept it for the gift that it is...16 total reviews
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love these lines: "Let dawn's renewal welcome
hushed placidity" the down sometimes it's us losing our faith, but then miracles happens and we get the happiness of believing back. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I love these lines: "Let dawn's renewal welcome
hushed placidity" the down sometimes it's us losing our faith, but then miracles happens and we get the happiness of believing back. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Lyn Peters
Your lovely and thought provoking submission is an excellent take on the contest prompt. I expect you have submitted a winner. Thank you for sharing your work. Best regards.
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Your lovely and thought provoking submission is an excellent take on the contest prompt. I expect you have submitted a winner. Thank you for sharing your work. Best regards.
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Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hi Lyn, I'm not finding any suggestions for changes or errors in your review. However, you only gave a four star rating which indicates that adjustments need to be made to the post. Could you please let me know what you think needs to be fixed or let me know what you didn't like about it to rate a four? Thank you!
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No suggestions for improvement, I thought the work was lovely. I had a maximum of five stars to award and felt that, though the work was good, it was brief. I typically award more stars for longer work. I hope this is helpful. Still, really well written.
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It is limited to only 25 syllables by the contest rules...?? Is it fair to take off because I honestly could NOT make it longer...?
Comment from Erika Seshadri
I really enjoyed this one. A reminder that each dawn is a new day. A fresh start. I love how the yellow writing matches the photograph. I see this is an entry into the Naani Prompt contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I really enjoyed this one. A reminder that each dawn is a new day. A fresh start. I love how the yellow writing matches the photograph. I see this is an entry into the Naani Prompt contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Pantygynt
A new day and a new chance for peace. I counted this out as 25 syllables:
Whilst anger roils and obfuscates, 8
peace is in retreat... 5
Yet dawn's renewal welcomes 7
hushed placidity 5
Does that place it illegally as not being 'between' 20 and 25? I rather think it does because if you read between the lines, you are not reading the lines that form the borders. But some people will include two numbers given. I have no idea how the compliance committee will view it, so I don't feel confident in removing a star.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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A new day and a new chance for peace. I counted this out as 25 syllables:
Whilst anger roils and obfuscates, 8
peace is in retreat... 5
Yet dawn's renewal welcomes 7
hushed placidity 5
Does that place it illegally as not being 'between' 20 and 25? I rather think it does because if you read between the lines, you are not reading the lines that form the borders. But some people will include two numbers given. I have no idea how the compliance committee will view it, so I don't feel confident in removing a star.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you for the heads-up!
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent poem and perfect for the writing prompt contest! From top to bottom, it never missed a beat and it's difficult to deal with a smaller poem bc in them "There's no place to hide,"
God bless you for the support you've offered me!
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Excellent poem and perfect for the writing prompt contest! From top to bottom, it never missed a beat and it's difficult to deal with a smaller poem bc in them "There's no place to hide,"
God bless you for the support you've offered me!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Yes ma'am!!! And thanx for your review here!
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Comment from Gloria ....
Perfect Naani and beautiful publishing choice.
It's nice when anger dissipates with the arrival of morning sun. You know it's going to be a good day.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth with this gem. :)
Gloria
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reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Perfect Naani and beautiful publishing choice.
It's nice when anger dissipates with the arrival of morning sun. You know it's going to be a good day.
Wishing you much luck in the voting booth with this gem. :)
Gloria
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Comment Written 02-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you so much for your reassuring comments, Gloria!
