Morning's Fresh Perspective
Accept it for the gift that it is...16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Morning's Fresh Perspective, has twenty-five syllables, four lines, and opens up the heart for a new day with a better outlook.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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This naani, Morning's Fresh Perspective, has twenty-five syllables, four lines, and opens up the heart for a new day with a better outlook.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2021
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Thanx so much for dropping by, Bill! ;)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh yes, please, let go of anger before bed -- it's a lesson my mother taught frequently. Let the glory of a new day refresh and renew perspective!
This is a marvelous poem and sage advice!!!
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Oh yes, please, let go of anger before bed -- it's a lesson my mother taught frequently. Let the glory of a new day refresh and renew perspective!
This is a marvelous poem and sage advice!!!
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Patty Palmer
A nice poem and well written. Things always seem to look better in the morning. When in anger or worry, best to let it wait until the dawn to think it through. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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A nice poem and well written. Things always seem to look better in the morning. When in anger or worry, best to let it wait until the dawn to think it through. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 04-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Wendy G
A universal plea, for relief from loudness, rage, self-centredness and back into the serenity of peaceful, thankful living. Well written. Good wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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A universal plea, for relief from loudness, rage, self-centredness and back into the serenity of peaceful, thankful living. Well written. Good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Mia Twysted
I hear that peace is in the distance, but it is hidden and we must find it. If we just allow the sun to be the sun we may be able to find our way back to each other and be better and smarter for it.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I hear that peace is in the distance, but it is hidden and we must find it. If we just allow the sun to be the sun we may be able to find our way back to each other and be better and smarter for it.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Yes! Thank you for your review.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I hear that peace is in the distance, but it is hidden and we must find it. If we just allow the sun to be the sun we may be able to find our way back to each other and be better and smarter for it.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I hear that peace is in the distance, but it is hidden and we must find it. If we just allow the sun to be the sun we may be able to find our way back to each other and be better and smarter for it.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Yes! Thank you for your review.
Comment from equestrik
This is a beautiful presentation here with your lovely sunrise picture to go with your well written poem-I learned new vocabulary here! Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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This is a beautiful presentation here with your lovely sunrise picture to go with your well written poem-I learned new vocabulary here! Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you!!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Naani writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation and imagery. Well-chosen words. I didn't know the word obfuscates, I learned something today. The poem has a calming feeling. Good luck in the contest. Yours is my favorite in the voting booth.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the Naani writing prompt contest. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Lovely presentation and imagery. Well-chosen words. I didn't know the word obfuscates, I learned something today. The poem has a calming feeling. Good luck in the contest. Yours is my favorite in the voting booth.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you so very much for your enthusiastic and encouraging review!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This 5-7-5 poem speaks that anger upset befuddles, and that peace is in shades so morning's fresh perspective welcomes hushed gravity; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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This 5-7-5 poem speaks that anger upset befuddles, and that peace is in shades so morning's fresh perspective welcomes hushed gravity; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Thank you!
Comment from Earl Corp
I had to look up what obfuscate means. I think the dawning of a new day usually clears up your emotions and gives you fresh eyes to look at problems with. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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I had to look up what obfuscate means. I think the dawning of a new day usually clears up your emotions and gives you fresh eyes to look at problems with. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2021
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
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Glad to be your 'word of the day' supplier here, Earl!! ;) Thank you for your review!
