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The Two of Me

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Chochee Medina Life and Times

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Comment from equestrik
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This is a fun contest and I am enjoying this entry! Your author's notes provide a lot of explanation for your style and choice of writing. All the best to you.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


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Comment from Sugarray77
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Speedy is one of my fave!... This is a well written verse and an excellent response to the cartoon prompt. I remember this vibrant cartoon and think you chose a good one to act as your theme/enhancement!! Well done and good luck!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


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Comment from moonsunrise
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I can only hope to write like this one day. What a great poem and image!
It brought back so many memories of childhood days. My siblings and I loved watching cartoons and so looked forward to "The Wonderful World of Disney" on the weekends. Life seemed so much simpler then than now, especially for children.
Thanks so much for sharing.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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I enjoyed your fun free verse, Mystery Author. You formatted your lines in a pleasing way with much information. Good job with the contest prompt. Your image is supportive of your well-chosen words.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


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Comment from donette1914
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I miss the old cartoons
very well written and ones are drawn in with your words
very cleaver story line and a photo that go's perfect.
I hope for the best in the contest
thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


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Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a cute and entertaining saga about Speedy and Slowpoke. It is a very appropriate entry for the cartoon contest. The rhymes are well thought out.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


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Comment from Erika Seshadri
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Oh my goodness, Speedy and Slowpoke Gonzales. You just yanked me back to my childhood with this one. Thank you.

Well written, I like the ode style format. I see it's an entry into the contest. Good luck!

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


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Comment from Goodadvicechan
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I like the cartoon picture. It is very pretty.
Thank you for explaining "Ode Style Metaphorical Cartoon Messaging Free Verse." It is interesting to read your poem.

I like the following sentences: "Working hard to get things quickly done with no time left to fiddle..." ... and... "Speedy's Time flys..." ... and ... "There's alway a bit of truth..."

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2021


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