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Lockdown Love

Rictameter

19 total reviews 
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Your well-written, thoughtful poem conveys a moving message about the perseverance of real love during difficult times--like present day, when Covid has placed limits on closeness.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks for reveiwing zanya
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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So many people have been affected by the pandemic and it has broken up relationships and thwarted romance, stopped weddings from taking place and neutralised kisses, I wish it was all over. Your poem is poignant and truthful here Zanya, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Yes it's so sad - just about everything we do is affected ! Thanks for sharing zanya
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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'Lockdown Love', is an extremely well-written and thought-provoking piece. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest! Please let me know how you get on?

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks for sharing zanya
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 05-Feb-2021
    zanya, you're very welcome.
    God bless stay safe! and have a great week end. :)))
    the Duchess
Comment from Bill Schott
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This rictameter, Lockdown Love, has the proper formatting and reminds the reader that separations like these will end and the good times will begin again.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Yes let's hope so ! zanya
Comment from Gert sherwood
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zanya your Rictameter
Lockdown Love wonderful of how you wrote--
This part in you well versed poem.---

For love holds steady through
darkest days or longest
nights. For time heals
young hearts.
Gert


 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
reply by Gert sherwood on 05-Feb-2021
    You are welcome zanya
    Gert
Comment from Boogienights
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A very lovely sentiment expressed in this well written poem. Love does survive and will after this pandemic, you have very aptly stated this in your contest entry. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    And thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from Loren .
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Well done and presented with a good message. Is it not love that keeps all of our hearts young? You have answered it well here. I guess it's the enduring of all those ups and downs and trials of lonely feelings of abandonment that creeps in to steal the youth of our hearts. But, yes, steadfast, as in most things is the key. Stay calm and carry on. Loren

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 05-Feb-2021
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
Comment from lyenochka
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I like your use of the repeated lines with the first use of "Young hearts" as the subject and the last use as the object of "heals." Even though there are heartaches in love, ultimately, they are healed. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 10-Feb-2021
    Thanks for a great reveiw zanya
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written rictameter about young love that cannot evolve naturally during the lockdown conditions and the lovers only contact us digitally.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
    Yes times are strange ! Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Wendy G
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A positive tribute to the strength of love and the creativeness of people to continue to find ways to express and maintain love. Your theme is well suited to this format. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Feb-2021


reply by the author on 03-Feb-2021
    Thanks for reviewing zanya